唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and expresses your feelings well, but try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary to describe your feelings.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it gives me a sense of freedom and allows me to express my emotions through both the lyrics and the melody.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct tense and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I have tried to learn singing by myself. Although I wasn't very good at first, I believe I have improved a little through self-practice.

建議: Your answer is clear but includes filler words like 'uh' and some redundancy. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I would like to sing for as many people as possible; however, since singing is not my strong point and I haven't had many opportunities to perform, I usually sing for my friends and family.

建議: Your answer conveys the idea but is somewhat repetitive and lacks smooth linking. Try to use linking words and more precise vocabulary to express your thoughts clearly.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can evoke both happiness and sadness, depending largely on the lyrics, background music, and the singer's performance, as it conveys various emotions to the audience.

× I love singing because I feel like freedom.

✓ I love singing because I feel free.

The phrase 'feel like freedom' is incorrect because 'like' is used to compare or indicate similarity, but here the intended meaning is to express a state or feeling. The correct adjective is 'free' to describe the feeling. So, 'I feel free' is the proper expression.

× Yes, I try to learn it by myself, but I was not very good at singing.

✓ Yes, I tried to learn it by myself, but I was not very good at singing.

The sentence refers to a past action, so the verb 'try' should be in the past tense 'tried' to maintain tense consistency.

× But before right now I I think I improved a little bit after teaching myself how to sing.

✓ But before now, I think I have improved a little bit after teaching myself how to sing.

The phrase 'before right now' is awkward; 'before now' is better. Also, 'I improved' is simple past, but since the improvement relates to the present, present perfect 'have improved' is more appropriate.

× I want to sing for as many people as possible, but uh, I did not have many shows and uh, singing is not my strong point, so I just sing for my friends and my family.

✓ I want to sing to as many people as possible, but uh, I have not had many shows and uh, singing is not my strong point, so I just sing for my friends and my family.

The verb 'sing' is usually followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the audience. Also, 'did not have many shows' should be 'have not had many shows' to indicate experience up to now.

× It depends a lot of singer as well.

✓ It depends a lot on the singer as well.

The correct preposition after 'depends' is 'on', not 'of'. So, 'depends a lot on the singer' is correct.