唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'seeing' thay vì 'singing', 'uplift' thay vì 'uplifts'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để làm cho câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and improves my mood, especially when I am alone.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: 'I don't officially learning' nên là 'I haven't officially learned'). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Not really. Music was a compulsory subject in primary school, but we only learned the lyrics and sang. I haven't officially learned how to sing.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'to think for' nên là 'to sing for', 'stand up a lot of people' nên là 'sing in front of many people').

範例: I don't have a specific person to sing for because I'm quite shy to sing in front of many people.

建議: Bạn cần sửa lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ: 'seeing' nên là 'singing'), và làm câu trả lời rõ ràng, logic hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh mâu thuẫn trong câu.

範例: Definitely yes. Singing can help reduce stress and improve people's mood, so it can bring happiness to them.

× Of course, seeing is the best way to avoid and relieve my stress.

✓ Of course, singing is the best way to avoid and relieve my stress.

The student used 'seeing' instead of 'singing'. 'Singing' is the correct present participle form of the verb 'sing' to describe the activity. 'Seeing' is unrelated and changes the meaning of the sentence.

× It's really uplift my mood, especially when I am alone.

✓ It really uplifts my mood, especially when I am alone.

The phrase 'It's really uplift my mood' is incorrect. 'It' should be followed by the verb in third person singular form 'uplifts' without 'really' before the verb. Also, 'It's' (it is) is incorrect here. The correct structure is 'It really uplifts my mood'.

× Not really, music was a compulsory subject when I was in primary school.

✓ Not really, music was a compulsory subject when I was in primary school.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× However, we just learned the lyrics and sing.

✓ However, we just learned the lyrics and sang.

The verb 'sing' should be in the past tense 'sang' to match the past tense 'learned' and the context of the sentence describing a past event.

× I I don't officially learning how to sing exactly.

✓ I don't officially learn how to sing exactly.

The phrase 'I don't officially learning' is incorrect. After 'don't', the base form of the verb 'learn' should be used, not the present participle 'learning'.

× Uh, I don't have any specific person to think for because I'm really shy to stand up a lot of people and sing.

✓ Uh, I don't have any specific person to think of because I'm really shy to stand up in front of a lot of people and sing.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect after 'think'. The correct preposition is 'of'. Also, 'stand up a lot of people' is missing the preposition 'in front of' to indicate standing before an audience.

× Definitely yes, because seeing can really stress and afflict their mood so it can also bring happiness to people.

✓ Definitely yes, because singing can really relieve stress and improve their mood so it can also bring happiness to people.

Again, 'seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. Also, 'stress and afflict their mood' is awkward and incorrect; 'relieve stress and improve their mood' is the correct expression.