唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「Why yes」よりも「Yes, I do」の方が自然です。また、「strengthen our bands」は意味が不明瞭なので、具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。文を簡潔にし、より自然な表現を心がけてください。

範例: Yes, I do like singing, especially English songs recently because it helps me practice my pronunciation. I also enjoy going to karaoke with my friends, which helps us bond and have fun together.

建議: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「formal reasons」は「formal lessons」が正しいです。また、「checked how to sing well in YouTube」よりも「watched singing tutorials on YouTube」の方が自然です。文を短くし、正しい語彙を使うことを意識してください。

範例: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but sometimes I watch free tutorials on YouTube to improve my singing skills.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。「I also like her」や「That's the songs who I've never heard」は意味が通じません。質問に対して直接的かつ明確に答え、具体的な理由や状況を説明することが必要です。

範例: I don't have a specific person in mind, but I enjoy singing in front of my friends who haven't heard me sing before. It makes me feel confident and happy.

建議: 文法の誤りと不完全な文があり、意味が伝わりにくいです。「people who think」は不自然で、「people's feelings」などに変えると良いでしょう。また、最後の文が途中で終わっているため、完全な文にしてください。具体的な理由や例を加えると良いです。

範例: I think singing can bring happiness depending on the person. Shy people may hesitate to sing in front of others, but those who enjoy singing often feel happy and want to improve their skills.

× I like singing, especially English songs recently because it is good to practice my English pronunciation and I also like going to karaoke with my friend.

✓ I have especially liked singing English songs recently because it is good for practicing my English pronunciation, and I also like going to karaoke with my friends.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'especially English songs recently' which is awkward. Also, 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context. The verb tense is adjusted to present perfect to indicate recent ongoing activity. 'Good to practice' is better expressed as 'good for practicing'.

× It can strengthen our bands.

✓ It can strengthen our bonds.

The word 'bands' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'bonds' meaning relationships or connections. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but it affects meaning.

× I've never taken formal reasons but sometimes I checked how to sing well in YouTube.

✓ I've never taken formal lessons but sometimes I check how to sing well on YouTube.

'Reasons' is incorrect; the correct word is 'lessons'. 'Checked' should be present tense 'check' to match 'sometimes' indicating habitual action. 'In YouTube' should be 'on YouTube' (preposition correction).

× It is for free and it helps puts me to improve my singing skills.

✓ It is free and it helps me improve my singing skills.

'For free' is better expressed as 'free'. 'Helps puts me to improve' is incorrect; correct form is 'helps me improve'. The phrase 'helps me improve' uses the bare infinitive after 'helps'.

× Nothing in particular, but I like singing in front of my friends who have never had my singing voice, and I also like her.

✓ Nothing in particular, but I like singing in front of my friends who have never heard my singing voice, and I also like it.

'Have never had my singing voice' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have never heard my singing voice'. 'I also like her' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'I also like it' refers to singing or the situation. Pronoun usage is corrected for clarity.

× That's the songs who I've never heard.

✓ Those are the songs that I've never heard.

'That's' is singular but 'songs' is plural; correct demonstrative pronoun is 'Those'. 'Who' is used for people; for songs, use 'that'.

× I think it depends on the person who think.

✓ I think it depends on the person who thinks.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'person' is singular, so verb should be 'thinks' not 'think'.

× For shy people, they hesitate to sing in front of a lot of people in karaoke.

✓ For shy people, they hesitate to sing in front of a lot of people at karaoke.

The correct preposition for locations like 'karaoke' is 'at' not 'in'.

× But for the people who sing well, maybe they like to improve their.

✓ But for people who sing well, maybe they like to improve their singing.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'their' which is incomplete. It should be followed by a noun such as 'singing' to complete the thought.