唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點重複且語法錯誤，建議簡潔且正確表達原因，例如使用正確的時態和避免重複。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress.

建議: 回答中有語意不清和錯誤（sleep應為sing），建議直接回答問題並清楚表達自己的想法，避免語法錯誤。

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I enjoy singing casually in my free time to relax, without pressure.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和重複，建議使用更自然的表達並說明原因。

範例: I prefer to sing alone because I'm not confident about my singing voice and enjoy listening to myself.

建議: 回答中語法錯誤且結尾不完整，建議使用連接詞使句子更流暢並完整表達想法。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because when we listen to someone sing, we can feel their emotions, whether happiness or sadness.

× Yes I like singing because when I singing I can relax and release my stress to when while singing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I sing, I can relax and release my stress while singing.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'when I'. The correct form is the base verb 'sing' after 'when I' to indicate the action. Also, 'to when while singing' is redundant and incorrect; 'while singing' suffices.

× No, I've never learned how to sleep because I think that singing is a part of interest of my life and I can just sing when I have a free time and just to relax.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing because I think that singing is a part of my life interest and I can just sing when I have free time just to relax.

The word 'sleep' is a mistake; it should be 'sing' to match the context. Also, 'a part of interest of my life' is awkward; 'a part of my life interest' is clearer. 'A free time' should be 'free time' without 'a' because 'time' is uncountable here.

× I don't want it to be my stressful.

✓ I don't want it to be stressful for me.

'My stressful' is incorrect because 'stressful' is an adjective and needs to modify a noun. The phrase should be 'stressful for me' to express that the activity should not cause stress to the speaker.

× I only want to sing for my by myself because I'm not really confident about my singing voice so I only want to sing by myself and to listen by myself.

✓ I only want to sing by myself because I'm not really confident about my singing voice, so I only want to sing and listen by myself.

The phrase 'sing for my by myself' is incorrect; 'by myself' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate doing something alone. Also, 'to listen by myself' is better as 'listen by myself' without 'to'.

× Yes, I think singing can be bring happiness to other people because when we listen someone singing we can feel the happiness or the sadness from the singer.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to other people because when we listen to someone singing, we can feel the happiness or sadness from the singer.

'Can be bring' is incorrect; it should be 'can bring' as 'can' is a modal verb followed by the base verb. Also, 'listen someone singing' requires the preposition 'to' as in 'listen to someone singing'.

× So and I think that if we listen to a person singing really happy.

✓ So, I think that if we listen to a person singing, we feel really happy.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding 'we feel' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning. Also, 'So and' is redundant; 'So,' suffices.