唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to make your sentences grammatically correct and complete. Also, avoid redundancy and be more natural. For example, you can say directly that you don't like singing because you feel your voice is not melodious, and you haven't tried singing much.

範例: I don't like singing because I feel my voice is not melodious. Also, I haven't tried singing often, so I don't enjoy it much.

建議: Your answer is good but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid grammatical errors. Also, keep your sentences concise and clear.

範例: I have never learned to sing because I think my voice is not pleasant. Moreover, learning to sing requires a lot of practice, but due to my hectic schedule, I haven't been able to develop this skill.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I don't want to sing for anyone because I am naturally shy, and singing in front of others makes me feel uncomfortable.

建議: Your answer is good and relevant but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better linking words. Also, avoid small grammatical errors like 'a singing'.

範例: Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel relaxed and comfortable. For example, many people enjoy listening to music when they are stressed to calm their minds.

× Honestly speaking, I don't like singing because I think I don't have a melodious voice and I'm not Try this.

✓ Honestly speaking, I don't like singing because I think I don't have a melodious voice and I'm not trying this.

The phrase 'I'm not Try this' is incorrect because 'try' should be in the '-ing' form after 'I'm not' to indicate the continuous aspect. The correct form is 'I'm not trying this'. This is an example of the verb + -ing form error.

× Well, I have not ever learned how to sing a song because I feel my voice is not very pleasant to listen to and therefore a lot of practice and skills are required. But I due to my hectic schedule I can never develop myself.

✓ Well, I have never learned how to sing a song because I feel my voice is not very pleasant to listen to and therefore a lot of practice and skills are required. But due to my hectic schedule, I can never develop myself.

The phrase 'I have not ever learned' is grammatically correct but awkward; 'I have never learned' is more natural. Also, 'But I due to my hectic schedule' is incorrect; the pronoun 'I' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'But due to my hectic schedule'. This correction addresses past tense usage and sentence structure.

× No, I do not want to sing for anybody because I feel I am shy nature and I feel shy to sing a song therefore I don't want it.

✓ No, I do not want to sing for anybody because I feel I am shy by nature and I feel shy to sing a song; therefore, I don't want to.

The phrase 'I feel I am shy nature' is incorrect; it should be 'I am shy by nature' to correctly use the preposition with the noun 'nature'. Also, 'I don't want it' is vague; 'I don't want to' is more appropriate here. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and prepositions.

× Definitely a singing can bring happiness to people because people feel comfortable and it helps to relax your mind.

✓ Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people because people feel comfortable and it helps to relax your mind.

The article 'a' before 'singing' is incorrect because 'singing' here is an uncountable noun referring to the activity. Removing 'a' corrects the sentence. This is an example of the 'there be' issue related to article usage.