唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains repeated and incomplete phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct sentences to explain why you like singing.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. I also enjoy singing with my friends because it makes the experience more fun and enjoyable.

建議: Your answer has some repetition and grammar mistakes. Try to use correct tenses and avoid repeating words. Also, provide more specific details about your learning experience.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in school because it was part of our exam. I practiced regularly and improved my skills over time.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrases. Try to express your feelings clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I want to sing for my family because they always support me. When they listen to me sing, I feel proud and happy.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to explain your opinion clearly using simple sentences and correct grammar.

範例: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it helps them express their feelings and enjoy the moment.

× Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel better and remove my Mordoni when I go off.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel better and removes my Mordoni when I go off.

The verb 'remove' should be in the third person singular form 'removes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to singing). This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving verb form in the present tense.

× And then I sing with my friends and it's it's a very and it's a very.

✓ And then I sing with my friends, and it's very enjoyable.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive ('it's it's a very and it's a very'). It lacks a proper predicate and object. The correction provides a complete and meaningful sentence.

× Yes, I learned how to how to sing because it's a part of our school exam when I was young.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing because it was a part of our school exam when I was young.

The phrase 'it's a part' should be in the past tense 'it was a part' to match the past time frame 'when I was young'. This is a tense consistency issue.

× Then I practice my singing in school and day by day I become a pro singer.

✓ Then I practiced my singing in school, and day by day I became a pro singer.

The verbs 'practice' and 'become' should be in the past tense 'practiced' and 'became' to maintain consistency with the past time frame indicated by 'Then' and 'when I was young' earlier.

× Actually, when I think then everybody saw my thing and I feel very proud for that.

✓ Actually, when I think about it, everybody saw my performance, and I feel very proud of that.

The pronoun 'my thing' is vague and unclear; 'my performance' is more appropriate. Also, 'proud for that' should be 'proud of that' as the correct preposition with 'proud' is 'of'.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people 'cause when a boy or a girl or man sing a song then he remove his his happiness for his Singh.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when a boy, a girl, or a man sings a song, he removes his sadness through his singing.

The verb 'sing' should be 'sings' to agree with the singular subject. 'Remove his his happiness' is incorrect; likely intended to say 'removes his sadness'. Also, 'for his Singh' is unclear; corrected to 'through his singing'. This addresses subject-verb agreement and clarity in pronoun and noun usage.