唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为直接且表达了原因，但语言稍显简单，且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然且连贯。

範例: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not good. Moreover, I often feel shy when singing in front of others, which makes me uncomfortable.

建議: 回答简洁明了，但时态使用不够准确，且缺少连接词。建议注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使句子更自然。

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing during my primary school years because we had music classes once a week.

建議: 句子结构不够自然，表达略显生硬。建议调整句子结构，使用更地道的表达方式，并增加连接词。

範例: I usually feel shy singing in front of others, so I prefer to sing for my dog instead.

建議: 回答内容具体且有例子支持，但句子稍显重复，连接词使用不够自然。建议简化句子结构，使用更流畅的连接词。

範例: Yes, I believe singing helps people relax. For instance, my friend Lily often sings to relieve stress from studying.

× Yes, in my primary school we had music class once a week, so I had learned how to sing.

✓ Yes, in my primary school we had music class once a week, so I learned how to sing.

这里使用过去完成时（had learned）不合适，因为句子中已经有过去时态（had music class），应使用一般过去时（learned）表示过去发生的动作。建议将“had learned”改为“learned”。

× Because I always feel shy for others so I prefer to sing for my dog.

✓ Because I always feel shy around others, I prefer to sing for my dog.

短语“feel shy for others”中的介词“for”使用错误，正确表达应为“feel shy around others”，表示在别人面前感到害羞。建议将“for”改为“around”。

× Because I always feel shy for others so I prefer to sing for my dog.

✓ Because I always feel shy around others, I prefer to sing for my dog.

句子中同时使用了“Because”和“so”，造成连接词重复，应去掉其中一个。建议保留“Because”，去掉“so”，并用逗号连接句子。

× For example, my friend Lily, she told me that she always likes singing when she feels stressed from study.

✓ For example, my friend Lily told me that she always likes singing when she feels stressed from studying.

句中“my friend Lily, she told me”存在重复主语，应去掉“she”。另外，“stressed from study”中“study”应使用动名词形式“studying”。建议修改为“my friend Lily told me...stressed from studying”。