唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is enthusiastic and shows your interest in singing, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "everywhere, every time" and improve grammar, e.g., "a song from my favorite artist" should be "songs by my favorite artist." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it's my favorite hobby. I often sing songs by my favorite pop artists to express my emotions, especially when I'm tired or stressed.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms like "learned" instead of "learn." Also, avoid repeating "I think" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally because I don't consider it one of my talents. However, singing remains my favorite hobby since it helps me express my emotions and brings me joy, even though I find learning to sing quite challenging.

建議: Your answer is heartfelt but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid filler words like "Umm" and improve grammar, e.g., "which is make me feel comfortable" should be "which makes me feel comfortable." Use linking words to connect your reasons smoothly.

範例: If I had to sing for someone, I would choose my mom because she is very supportive and accepts my voice despite my limited singing skills. Knowing she appreciates me makes me feel comfortable and confident to perform for her, which I would really enjoy.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and smoother linking words. For example, replace "you can bring happiness" with "singing can bring happiness." Also, avoid repeating similar words like "joyful" twice.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions through music. For instance, listening to songs by your favorite artists or upbeat tunes can improve your mood and make you feel more positive.

× So yes, I love singing when I was tired and right now.

✓ So yes, I love singing when I am tired and right now.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with present context 'right now'. Since 'right now' indicates present time, the verb should be in present tense 'am' to maintain consistency.

× No, I have never learn how to sing because I think that is not one of my talent.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I think that is not one of my talents.

The present perfect tense requires the past participle form 'learned' instead of the base form 'learn'. Also, 'talent' should be plural 'talents' to match the context of multiple abilities.

× However, singing is my favorite hobby is help me express my emotion and bring me joyful.

✓ However, singing is my favorite hobby; it helps me express my emotions and brings me joy.

The original sentence has a structural error with two verbs 'is' and 'help' improperly connected. It needs to be split into two clauses with correct subject-verb agreement and proper noun forms: 'emotions' and 'joy'.

× And I think that learning singing is quite challenging and I think that I can't do it.

✓ And I think that learning to sing is quite challenging and I think that I can't do it.

The verb 'learning' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to sing' rather than the gerund 'singing' in this context. This is a common modal verb usage pattern.

× she would appreciate me which is make me feel comfortable for performing for hers.

✓ she would appreciate me which would make me feel comfortable performing for her.

The phrase 'which is make me' is incorrect; it should be 'which would make me' to match the conditional mood. Also, 'for hers' is incorrect; the correct pronoun is 'for her'.

× And yes I will, I would enjoy.

✓ And yes, I would enjoy it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'it' clarifies the object of enjoyment, and removing the contradictory 'I will' aligns the sentence with the conditional mood 'I would'.