唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅，避免重复，如"I do"重复使用。句子结构应更完整，注意时态一致。可以增加连接词使内容更连贯。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me learn English. When I was a child, I enjoyed singing Taylor Swift songs because their lyrics are beautiful and peaceful. Singing made it easier for me to learn English as a kid.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如"I'm not a good at singing"应为"I'm not good at singing"。表达应更简洁，避免重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I want to because I'm not very good at it. Sometimes I feel sad since many people can sing well, but I can't. However, learning singing lessons is quite expensive.

建議: 回答内容感人，但语法和表达需改进，如"I want to singing"应为"I want to sing"。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I want to sing for my grandmother because when I was a child, she used to sing Japanese songs for me. Now that she is sick and has no energy to sing, I hope to sing for her.

建議: 回答中表达不够准确，如"heal everything's problem"应为"heal everyone's problems"。建议使用更恰当的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Nowadays, with many cultures and music apps available, music can help heal everyone's problems and bring joy to many.

× I do like singing because singing can help me learning English.

✓ I do like singing because singing can help me learn English.

动词help后面应接动词原形，而不是动名词。这里应使用learn而非learning。

× When I was kid I like to sing Taylor Swift song because the songs lyrics it's very beautiful and peaceful.

✓ When I was a kid I liked to sing Taylor Swift songs because the song's lyrics are very beautiful and peaceful.

缺少冠词a，kid前应加a；like应使用过去式liked，因为描述过去的情况；song应为复数songs；songs lyrics应为song's lyrics，表示歌词属于歌曲；it's应改为are，因为lyrics是复数。

× For me as a kid it's very easier to learn English from the song.

✓ For me as a kid it was much easier to learn English from songs.

描述过去情况，谓语应使用过去时was；easier前不加very，应使用much；song应为复数songs。

× No I haven't. I do want to learn how to sing because I'm not a good at singing.

✓ No, I haven't. I do want to learn how to sing because I'm not good at singing.

be动词后不加冠词a，good是形容词，不能加a。

× So it's a pretty sad story but I wish I can learn that but it's very expensive.

✓ So it's a pretty sad story but I wish I could learn that, but it's very expensive.

wish后面表达与现在事实相反的愿望时，情态动词用过去式could，而不是can。

× I do want to sing for my grandmother because when I was a kid she always sang a Japanese song for me before she got sick and right now she doesn't have any energy to sing for me so I want to singing for her.

✓ I do want to sing for my grandmother because when I was a kid she always sang a Japanese song for me before she got sick and right now she doesn't have any energy to sing for me so I want to sing for her.

want后面应接动词原形sing，而不是动名词singing。

× I do think singing can bring happiness to people because there are a lot of different cultures and music apps nowadays.

✓ I do think singing can bring happiness to people because there are a lot of different cultures and music apps nowadays.

此句无明显冠词错误，保持原句。

× So for a lot of people, music can heal everything's problem and can bring happiness to everyone.

✓ So for a lot of people, music can heal everyone's problems and can bring happiness to everyone.

everything's problem应为everyone's problems，表示“每个人的问题”，且problems应为复数。