唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "I fight relaxing". Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. In the past, I was very passionate about it and used to sing along with videos on YouTube. Even now, I continue to sing as a hobby in my free time because it makes me feel happy.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh lỗi như "singing courses are". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: No, I have never taken any formal singing lessons. However, I often sing along to videos on YouTube in my free time because I enjoy music and it helps me relax.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tập trung vào câu chủ đề và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

範例: I am an introvert, so I rarely sing in front of many people. However, I would like to sing for my mother because it is a meaningful way to express my feelings to her through songs.

建議: Bạn cần tránh sử dụng các từ không rõ nghĩa hoặc bị ngắt quãng như "******" và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, absolutely. Singing helps people relax and escape from the pressures of daily work. Moreover, it allows them to express their inner feelings through meaningful songs, and they can sing for the people they love.

× I fight relaxing and a great way to relieve stress.

✓ I find relaxing is a great way to relieve stress.

The verb 'fight' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'find' followed by the gerund 'relaxing' to express that relaxing is perceived as a good way to relieve stress.

× I have never tried to sing well or take part in any singing courses are.

✓ I have never tried to sing well or take part in any singing courses.

The word 'are' at the end is unnecessary and causes a sentence structure error. Removing it corrects the sentence.

× I I would like to sing for my mother because I think it's a great way for me to express my inner feelings to her through a meaningful uh, songs and Apollo, and additionally my mother also.

✓ I would like to sing for my mother because I think it's a great way for me to express my inner feelings to her through meaningful songs. Additionally, my mother also...

The repeated 'I' is a typo. The phrase 'uh, songs and Apollo' is unclear and likely incorrect; it should be 'meaningful songs'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be properly ended or continued. Also, 'additionally my mother also' is redundant; 'additionally' or 'also' alone is sufficient.

× Singing is a great way for people to relax, ****** or escape from pressure of daily work.

✓ Singing is a great way for people to relax or escape from the pressure of daily work.

The phrase 'escape from pressure of daily work' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'pressure'. Also, the '******' indicates missing or unclear words which should be removed for clarity.

× Or it actually they can express their inner feelings through meaningful songs and they can sing for someone who love who they love.

✓ They can actually express their inner feelings through meaningful songs, and they can sing for someone they love.

The pronouns 'it' and 'they' are incorrectly used together; 'they' alone is correct. The phrase 'someone who love who they love' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'someone they love'.