唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn quá ngắn và không rõ ràng, thiếu cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: No, I don't like singing because I feel that I am not very good at it and it makes me feel uncomfortable.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng chưa chính xác và câu hơi dài dòng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I joined a choir where I received basic vocal training. Singing has always been a passion of mine, so those lessons helped me improve.

建議: Câu trả lời có nội dung tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng, từ vựng phù hợp và câu nối hợp lý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are very supportive. For example, during family gatherings, singing together creates a warm and memorable atmosphere.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm câu trả lời khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, từ vựng phù hợp và câu nối hợp lý để làm câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions. For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, especially in a group.

× I don't like singing because. Because. No good.

✓ I don't like singing because I am not good at it.

The original sentence is incomplete and fragmented. It lacks a complete clause after 'because', which is necessary to explain the reason. The correction provides a complete sentence with a clear reason.

× Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I took part in a tour where I received basic focal training and learning about which and dreams.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I took part in a tour where I received basic vocal training and learned about techniques and dreams.

The sentence mixes past tense 'received' with present participle 'learning' incorrectly. 'Learning' should be in past tense 'learned' to maintain tense consistency. Also, 'focal' is likely a typo for 'vocal', and 'which' is unclear, replaced with 'techniques' for clarity.

× Singing has always been been a passion of mine, so those lessons really help me me.

✓ Singing has always been a passion of mine, so those lessons really help me.

The sentence contains repeated words 'been been' and 'me me', which are typographical errors and should be removed for clarity.

× Singing for them feel special because they are supportive and it creates a warm, encouraging atmosphere.

✓ Singing for them feels special because they are supportive and it creates a warm, encouraging atmosphere.

The verb 'feel' does not agree with the singular subject 'Singing'. It should be 'feels' to match the singular subject.

× For example, during family gatherings, singing together often pouring us across and make the moments more memorable.

✓ For example, during family gatherings, singing together often brings us closer and makes the moments more memorable.

The original sentence uses 'pouring us across' which is incorrect and unclear. The verbs 'pouring' and 'make' do not agree with the subject. The correction uses appropriate verbs 'brings' and 'makes' with correct subject-verb agreement and clearer meaning.

× Singing aloud individuals to express their emotions and can be very applied to especially when drowned with others in a group or join.

✓ Singing allows individuals to express their emotions and can be very enjoyable, especially when done with others in a group or joined together.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'drowned with others' and 'can be very applied to'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.