唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 자연스러운 영어 표현을 사용하고, 질문에 직접적으로 답하며 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. When I sing, I feel confident and enjoy expressing my emotions.

建議: 문장이 불완전하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장 구조를 사용하며, 과거 경험을 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I learned some singing skills in elementary school music classes, but I am not very good at singing yet.

建議: 답변이 반복적이고 다소 어색합니다. 간결하게 핵심을 전달하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I want to sing for my future husband because singing is a special way to express my feelings when I propose to him.

建議: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 다양한 감정을 표현하는 어휘를 사용하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people feel calm, excited, and joyful. Music expresses many emotions, which is why it is so powerful.

× I like singing because when I sing, I'm. Think I'm became a like idol?

✓ I like singing because when I sing, I am. I think I became like an idol.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and incomplete structure. 'I'm.' is incomplete and 'became' is past tense but used incorrectly here. The correct form is 'I am' and 'I think I became like an idol.' Also, 'a like idol' is incorrect; it should be 'like an idol' because 'idol' starts with a vowel sound.

× Well when I was elementary school there were music classes so I learned some few skill but not just not I can do.

✓ Well, when I was in elementary school, there were music classes, so I learned a few skills but not much that I can do now.

The sentence has missing prepositions and incorrect quantifiers. 'was elementary school' should be 'was in elementary school' (preposition error). 'some few skill' is incorrect; it should be 'a few skills' (quantifier and plural noun). The phrase 'not just not I can do' is unclear and corrected to 'not much that I can do now' for clarity and grammar.

× I want to sing for my future husband because I want to propose to the guy who I like in the future, so I will. I think I will sing for him.

✓ I want to sing for my future husband because I want to propose to the guy whom I like in the future, so I think I will sing for him.

The relative pronoun 'who' should be 'whom' as it is the object of the verb 'like'. Also, the sentence 'so I will.' is incomplete and unclear; it is better combined with the next sentence for clarity.

× Yeah, of course singing can makes people calm and happy and exciting.

✓ Yeah, of course singing can make people calm, happy, and excited.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'makes' should be 'make'. Also, 'exciting' is an adjective describing something that causes excitement, but here the intended meaning is that people feel excited, so 'excited' is correct.

× All the emotions can bring from sing and music that I think that is good thing of music.

✓ All the emotions that can be brought from singing and music, I think, are good things about music.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'can bring from sing and music' is incorrect; it should be 'can be brought from singing and music'. Also, 'that I think that is good thing of music' is awkward and corrected to 'I think, are good things about music' for clarity and grammatical correctness.