唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and natural but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and making it more concise. Try to combine ideas smoothly and use linking words to connect your thoughts.

範例: I usually don't sing because I don't have a good singing voice, but I love listening to songs as they help me relax and feel happy.

建議: Your answer is informative and includes specific details, but the sentence structure can be improved for clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing.

範例: Although I'm not really into singing, I learned a traditional Nepali song called Fulkho Akama Phule Sangsara when I was in school, which means 'if you're good, you'll see good; if you're bad, you'll see bad.' This experience was quite memorable for me.

建議: Your answer is relevant and clear, but try to use linking words to make your response more coherent and avoid repetition. Also, keep sentences concise and avoid filler words.

範例: I generally don't sing often, but if I do, I prefer singing for myself because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Singing in front of others makes me nervous, so I'm not very comfortable doing that.

建議: Your answer is brief and could be expanded with more specific details and linking words to make it more effective and natural. Try to explain why singing brings happiness and give examples.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax their minds and express their feelings through lyrics, which can be very therapeutic and uplifting.

× I don't think I have good singing voice so I prefer to enjoy songs rather than trying it myself.

✓ I don't think I have a good singing voice so I prefer to enjoy songs rather than trying it myself.

The phrase 'good singing voice' is missing the article 'a' before the singular noun 'voice'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I learned a traditional Nepali song called Fulkho Akama Phule sangsara.

✓ I learnt a traditional Nepali song called Fulkho Akama Phule sangsara.

In British English, the past tense of 'learn' is commonly 'learnt' rather than 'learned'. Since the context seems formal and possibly British English, 'learnt' is preferred for consistency.

× Although I don't think often but that experience was quite memorable for me.

✓ Although I don't think about it often, that experience was quite memorable for me.

The phrase 'don't think often' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'about it' clarifies the meaning. Also, the conjunction 'but' is unnecessary after 'although' and should be removed for correct sentence structure.

× if I have to I would prefer singing for myself because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

✓ If I have to, I would prefer to sing for myself because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

After 'would prefer', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to sing' rather than the gerund 'singing'. This is the correct modal verb usage.

× Really singing in front of others makes me a bit nervous so I know I'm not very comfortable.

✓ Really, singing in front of others makes me a bit nervous, so I know that I'm not very comfortable.

Adding commas improves clarity. Also, adding 'that' after 'know' is more natural in English, making the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× singing helps them to relax their mind and also enables to express their feelings to others through the lyrics.

✓ Singing helps them to relax their minds and also enables them to express their feelings to others through the lyrics.

The pronoun 'them' is missing before 'to express'. Also, 'mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with plural pronoun 'them'. These corrections ensure proper pronoun use and subject-verb agreement.