唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'vocal impurity'. Try to give a clear reason why you like singing, using simple and correct English.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. It also improves my voice and confidence.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question and explain your reasons clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: No, I have never learnt how to sing. Although I enjoy singing, I don't like my voice because it sounds harsh. Also, when I sing loudly, my throat hurts, probably because I listen to loud music like hip hop and rock.

建議: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Make sure to use correct pronouns and complete sentences. Clearly state who you want to sing for and why.

範例: I want to sing for my mother because she is very special to me. Whenever I get a chance, I like to sing songs that remind me of her.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains repeated words and incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons using simple and correct English.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and focus. Singing can clear the mind and improve mood.

× Definitely yes, I like to singing.

✓ Definitely yes, I like to sing.

The verb 'like' is followed by the base form 'to sing' or the gerund 'singing', but not 'to singing'. The correct form is 'like to sing' or 'like singing'. Here, 'like to sing' fits better.

× Singing enhance the vocal impurity and helps to gain the wider knowledge about the singing and practicing.

✓ Singing enhances vocal purity and helps to gain wider knowledge about singing and practicing.

The subject 'Singing' is singular, so the verb should be 'enhances' not 'enhance'. Also, 'vocal impurity' is incorrect; it should be 'vocal purity'. 'The wider knowledge' should be 'wider knowledge' without 'the'.

× Make the man perfect in the singing.

✓ It makes a person perfect at singing.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. 'Make the man perfect in the singing' is incorrect. The corrected sentence provides a subject and proper verb form.

× Honestly speaking, no. I have interest in singing but but I Can't Sing because I doesn't like my voice, it is too hard and my total when I sing my throttle got pain because I like loud music, for example hip hop and rock music.

✓ Honestly speaking, no. I have an interest in singing but I can't sing because I don't like my voice; it is too harsh and whenever I sing, my throat gets pain because I like loud music, for example hip hop and rock music.

'I have interest' should be 'I have an interest'. 'Can't Sing' should be 'can't sing' (lowercase). 'I doesn't like' should be 'I don't like' for subject-verb agreement. 'My total' is unclear and replaced with 'whenever I sing'. 'My throttle got pain' should be 'my throat gets pain'.

× Whenever I get a chance to sing, I will sing in front of my mother as he is.

✓ Whenever I get a chance to sing, I will sing in front of my mother as she is.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect when referring to 'my mother'. The correct pronoun is 'she'.

× And I want to speak. I want to sing a song related to my mother.

✓ I want to say that I want to sing a song related to my mother.

The sentence 'And I want to speak.' is incomplete and unclear. Combining the two sentences improves clarity.

× Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people as singing is the best practices best practice to to make the concentration and has the ability to clear up the mind of an individual.

✓ Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people as singing is the best practice to improve concentration and has the ability to clear the mind of an individual.

'Best practices best practice' is redundant; 'best practice' is correct. 'To to make the concentration' should be 'to improve concentration'. 'Clear up the mind' is better as 'clear the mind'.

× If it was if it is, if it shows her.

✓ If it is so, it shows her.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. The correction attempts to make it a meaningful conditional sentence.