唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tập trung hơn vào câu hỏi. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, đồng thời sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp về việc bạn có thích hát hay không và lý do cụ thể, tránh lạc đề.

範例: I don't like singing because I feel shy and not confident when singing in front of others. Instead, I prefer listening to music and enjoy other art forms like painting and dancing.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu cú rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ sai như 'entrustment'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về việc học hát hoặc kinh nghiệm liên quan.

範例: I have never taken formal singing lessons because I am not confident in my singing skills. However, I enjoy playing musical instruments and have participated in local singing competitions occasionally.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi như 'hardest feedback' hay 'memorable guester'. Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc, có liên kết giữa các ý và sử dụng từ nối phù hợp.

範例: I like to sing for my friends because we often have karaoke nights together, and they give me honest feedback to help me improve. Also, I would like to sing romantic songs for someone special to express my feelings.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, tránh lỗi như 'release endorphins' không chia đúng, 'relieve the chess', 'sign up community', 'bring charge'. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it releases endorphins that improve mood. Singing together also helps people feel a sense of community and belonging. For example, karaoke is a popular activity that lifts people's spirits.

× I feel shy or embarrassed when singing in front of order.

✓ I feel shy or embarrassed when singing in front of others.

The word 'order' is incorrect here; the correct pronoun is 'others' to refer to other people. Using the correct pronoun improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Modern singer singing is not something I real of doing or have much interested in.

✓ Modern singing is not something I really enjoy doing or am much interested in.

The sentence contains incorrect word forms: 'real of doing' should be 'really enjoy doing', and 'have much interested in' should be 'am much interested in'. Correct adjective and verb forms are necessary for proper meaning and grammar.

× But I participate participated in local singing competitions.

✓ But I participated in local singing competitions.

The verb 'participate' is incorrectly repeated with both present and past tense forms. Since the action is in the past, only the past tense 'participated' should be used.

× They give me hardest feedback and help me improve.

✓ They give me honest feedback and help me improve.

The word 'hardest' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'honest'. Using the correct adjective is important for conveying the intended meaning.

× Singing for friends is a fun and experience.

✓ Singing for friends is a fun experience.

The phrase 'a fun and experience' is incorrect; 'fun' is an adjective modifying 'experience'. The conjunction 'and' is unnecessary here.

× Singing a romantic song can be a memorable guester.

✓ Singing a romantic song can be a memorable gesture.

The word 'guester' is incorrect; the correct word is 'gesture'. Correct word choice is essential for clear communication.

× Of course, singing release endorphins, which can make people feel happier is the right way to express emotions and relieve the chess.

✓ Of course, singing releases endorphins, which can make people feel happier. It is the right way to express emotions and relieve stress.

The verb 'release' should be in third person singular form 'releases' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs to be split for clarity. The word 'chess' is a typo and should be 'stress'.

× Singing together can create sign up community and belonging.

✓ Singing together can create a sense of community and belonging.

The phrase 'sign up community' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a sense of community'. Proper collocations are important for natural English.

× Many people sing in a sour or care to flip the mood.

✓ Many people sing in a choir or car to lift the mood.

The words 'sour' and 'care' are incorrect; the intended words are likely 'choir' and 'car'. Also, 'flip the mood' is better expressed as 'lift the mood'. Correct word choice and collocations improve clarity.

× Karaoke is a popular activity that brings charge.

✓ Karaoke is a popular activity that brings cheer.

The word 'charge' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'cheer' to express happiness or joy. Using the correct noun is important for meaning.