唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I'm feeling sad or stressed. Singing helps me express my emotions and lifts my mood. For example, I often sing sad songs to feel better during difficult times.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Hạn chế lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child because I believe it's important for young people. Learning to sing improved my skills and became one of my favorite hobbies, especially when I feel stressed.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như "regret" trong ngữ cảnh này.

範例: I want to sing for my family because they support me a lot. Also, I have always dreamed of singing in front of my class, as it would allow me to express my feelings and emotions clearly.

建議: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Hãy tránh những câu không rõ nghĩa và lặp từ.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because songs often reflect the feelings of their creators. When people sing, they can share joy and positive emotions with others.

× I'm I'm really like to sing every time I feel like in a bad mood or I feel sad, I usually think about a sad song or a bad song.

✓ I really like singing every time I feel in a bad mood or sad; I usually think about a sad song or a bad song.

The phrase 'I'm really like to sing' is incorrect because 'like' as a verb should be followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'I'm I'm' is a repetition error. The correct form is 'I really like singing'.

× Of course, I think this is the thing that people who are who are also young have to learn because when I'm the early child, I used to learn how to sing and it's make me feel sing better and it's also my favorite hobbies when I feel stressed.

✓ Of course, I think this is something that young people have to learn because when I was a child, I used to learn how to sing and it made me feel better at singing; it's also one of my favorite hobbies when I feel stressed.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'I'm the early child' should be 'I was a child' (past tense). 'It's make me feel sing better' should be 'it made me feel better at singing' to match past tense and correct verb form. Also, 'favorite hobbies' should be singular 'favorite hobby' or 'one of my favorite hobbies' because 'hobby' is countable.

× I want to sing for my family first especially I've always dreamed of singing in front of my class as it would give me a chance to express my feelings and show my true emotions.

✓ I want to sing for my family first, especially since I've always dreamed of singing in front of my class as it would give me a chance to express my feelings and show my true emotions.

The sentence is missing a conjunction or preposition to connect ideas properly. Adding 'since' clarifies the reason. Also, a comma after 'first' improves readability.

× It's also the only way to regret my feelings to someone special and is helpful.

✓ It's also the only way to express my feelings to someone special and is helpful.

The word 'regret' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is likely 'express'. Using the correct verb clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because I want who who create, created any song have their own bubbles.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because I think those who create any song have their own bubbles.

The phrase 'I want who who create, created any song' is incorrect. It should be 'I think those who create any song' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'created' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The verb tense should be present simple 'create' to indicate a general truth.