唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "it's have me relax" nên là "it helps me relax". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

範例: I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. I often sing my favorite songs that match my mood, which makes me feel more comfortable. For example, when I sing, I can forget about stress and just enjoy the moment.

建議: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn, đồng thời chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Câu trả lời hiện tại thiếu ý nghĩa và có lỗi ngữ pháp như "I have a because" và "I singing". Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và giải thích rõ lý do.

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't want to become a professional singer. I sing simply because I love music and want to sing for my friends.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I want sing from" nên là "I want to sing for". Ngoài ra, bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời với lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

範例: I want to sing for my family and my girlfriend because it helps me feel comfortable and relaxed. Also, singing for them can improve our relationships and bring us closer.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "it's allowed to them express" nên là "it allows them to express". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi từ vựng như "funded" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and enjoy music. For example, when people sing together, it creates a strong sense of connection and strengthens their relationships. Therefore, singing is not only fun but also beneficial.

× I really like singing because it's have me relax and happy.

✓ I really like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy.

The phrase 'it's have me relax and happy' is incorrect. 'It's' is a contraction of 'it is', which should be followed by a verb in the present tense. The correct verb is 'helps' (third person singular present tense) and 'feel' to describe the state. The sentence should be 'it helps me relax and feel happy.'

× I love singing my favorite song which always feels my mood and make me feel more comfortable.

✓ I love singing my favorite songs which always lift my mood and make me feel more comfortable.

The verb 'feels' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'lift' to express improving mood. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to match 'which always lift'. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' if singular, but since 'songs' is plural, 'make' is correct. The sentence is corrected to 'I love singing my favorite songs which always lift my mood and make me feel more comfortable.'

× For example, when I sings I can forget about stress and just enjoy the moment.

✓ For example, when I sing I can forget about stress and just enjoy the moment.

The verb 'sings' is incorrect for the first person singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'sing' without 's'.

× No, I have a because I don't want to professional singer.

✓ No, I haven't because I don't want to be a professional singer.

The sentence is incomplete and missing words. 'I have a' is incorrect; it should be 'I haven't' (have not) to answer the question properly. Also, 'to professional singer' should be 'to be a professional singer.'

× I singing because I love music and I want to sing for my friend.

✓ I sing because I love music and I want to sing for my friends.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used as a main verb here; it should be 'I sing'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to be more natural unless referring to one friend specifically.

× I want sing from my family and my girlfriend.

✓ I want to sing for my family and my girlfriend.

The verb 'want' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'sing'. Also, 'from' is incorrect preposition here; it should be 'for' to indicate the audience.

× Uh it's helped me feels comfortable and relaxed.

✓ Uh, it helps me feel comfortable and relaxed.

'It's helped' is present perfect tense but context suggests present simple 'it helps'. Also, 'feels' should be 'feel' after 'helps me'.

× I I want to sing for my girlfriend or my family because I want to improve relationship and.

✓ I want to sing for my girlfriend or my family because I want to improve our relationship.

The sentence is incomplete and has repetition 'I I'. Also, 'improve relationship and' is incomplete; it should be 'improve our relationship.'

× Yes, I believe a singing can bring happiness to the people because it's allowed to them express their emotion and enjoy the music.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and enjoy music.

The article 'a' before 'singing' is incorrect; 'singing' here is an uncountable noun and does not need 'a'. 'It's allowed to them' should be 'it allows them'. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions'. 'The music' should be 'music' without 'the'.

× For example, when people sing together, it's great a sense of connection, exchange their relationship.

✓ For example, when people sing together, it creates a great sense of connection and strengthens their relationships.

The phrase 'it's great a sense' is incorrect; it should be 'it creates a great sense'. 'Exchange their relationship' is unclear and incorrect; 'strengthens their relationships' is more appropriate.

× Therefore, singing is not only funded, also have the evidence.

✓ Therefore, singing is not only fun, but also has benefits.

The sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Funded' is incorrect; likely meant 'fun'. 'Also have the evidence' is incorrect; better to say 'also has benefits' or 'also has positive effects.'