唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误，如“feels”应为“feel”，“personalities”应为“personality”。建议注意动词形式和名词单复数的正确使用，同时可以用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and reduces stress. Moreover, singing boosts my confidence and improves my personality.

建議: 回答中存在时态和表达不自然的问题，如“went to sing”应为“go singing”，“seem to listen”表达不准确。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达，同时避免重复和冗余。

範例: No, I haven't learned to sing formally. Usually, when I go singing, I just listen to music or watch videos online. I haven't taken any formal singing lessons because I focus more on learning to play the piano.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“families”应为“family”，“when I sing for as families graduate”句子不完整且难以理解。建议简化句子结构，使用清晰的表达，并注意单复数和连词的正确使用。

範例: I want to sing for my family and friends because I am quite shy and find it hard to sing in front of strangers. Singing for people I know makes me feel happy and relaxed, and it helps me express my emotions better. It also brings us closer together.

建議: 回答中有拼写错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，“Germany”应为“happy”，且表达不够连贯。建议注意拼写和用词准确，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并提供具体例子。

範例: I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, in movies or online videos, scenes often show people feeling happy and relaxed while singing. Singing together can help people feel closer and strengthen their relationships.

× I like singing because it can help me feels relaxed and reduce stress.

✓ I like singing because it can help me feel relaxed and reduce stress.

动词feel在这里应与主语me保持一致，使用原形feel而不是第三人称单数形式feels。

× When I sing a song, it can improve my personalities by making me more confident.

✓ When I sing a song, it can improve my personality by making me more confident.

personality是不可数名词，表示个性，不能用复数personalities。

× Usually when I went to sing I just seem to listen to music or watch videos online.

✓ Usually when I go to sing I just seem to listen to music or watch videos online.

句子描述的是习惯动作，应使用一般现在时go而不是过去时went。

× I never have taken any academic singing lessons because I focus on more on learning how to play piano.

✓ I have never taken any academic singing lessons because I focus more on learning how to play the piano.

focus后面不需要重复使用on，且play piano前应加定冠词the。

× Hmm, I want to sing for my families and friends because I'm quite shy and find it difficult to sing in front of strangers.

✓ Hmm, I want to sing for my family and friends because I'm quite shy and find it difficult to sing in front of strangers.

family作为整体名词通常用单数形式，表示家庭成员的集合。

× Singing for people I know makes me feel happy and relaxed and it helps me express my emotions better when I sing for as families graduate, it brings us closer.

✓ Singing for people I know makes me feel happy and relaxed and it helps me express my emotions better. When my family graduates, it brings us closer.

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词，且as families graduate表达不清，应拆分为两个句子并调整表达。

× I think seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people.

seeing是看见的意思，语境中应为singing（唱歌）。

× For examples, in movies or online videos, scenes often show people feeling Germany and relaxed.

✓ For example, in movies or online videos, scenes often show people feeling happy and relaxed.

for example是固定短语，且Germany是国家名，语境中应为happy（高兴）。

× Singing together can help people feel closer and strengthen their relationship.

✓ Singing together can help people feel closer and strengthen their relationships.

people是复数，relationship应使用复数形式relationships。