唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh dùng những câu ngắt quãng và không rõ nghĩa.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel more confident and relaxed. Whenever I feel stressed or sad during the day, singing cheers me up. I believe singing can benefit everyone by improving their mood and confidence.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và trình bày ý tưởng một cách rõ ràng, tránh những câu không hoàn chỉnh hoặc lặp lại. Sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về việc học hát và lợi ích của nó.

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing. My mother always encourages me because she believes that singing can help me improve my English and boost my confidence. This skill is useful for my studies at university and will help me in my future career.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn. Hãy giới thiệu người bạn muốn hát cho, giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên.

範例: I want to sing for my favorite idol, Santosh, because he inspires me with his energy and passion for singing. His successful career motivates me to pursue my own dreams.

建議: Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách cung cấp thêm lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn. Sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and connect with others. When people listen to singing, it can lift their spirits and make them feel more comfortable and joyful.

× More confident with everyone.

✓ I feel more confident with everyone.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I feel' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Help me.

✓ It helps me.

The original sentence is a fragment without a subject and verb. Adding 'It helps me' clarifies that singing helps the speaker.

× I'll have me to relax when I was straight or sad in the day.

✓ It helps me to relax when I am stressed or sad during the day.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'll have me' and mixes tenses. Correcting to present tense 'helps me' and fixing 'straight' to 'stressed' improves clarity and grammar.

× I think singing can help everyone nearly to firm all about.

✓ I think singing can help everyone to feel better about everything.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect word usage ('nearly to firm all about'). Replacing with 'to feel better about everything' conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× Every day I sleep with my mother, she say if you good at singing I think.

✓ Every day I sleep with my mother, and she says if you are good at singing, I think...

The verb 'say' should be 'says' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. Also, 'if you good' should be 'if you are good' to be grammatically correct.

× And you speaking English more easily and confident with everyone actually help me at the university or?

✓ And speaking English more easily and confidently with everyone actually helps me at the university.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Changing 'you speaking' to 'speaking', adding 'confidently' as an adverb, and correcting 'help' to 'helps' for subject-verb agreement improves clarity.

× The future job in mind.

✓ I have a future job in mind.

The original is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'I have' completes the sentence.

× I want to sing for my favorite idol, Santosh, because he is the energies to me to speak singing and his career can be a good thing to.

✓ I want to sing for my favorite idol, Santosh, because he is an inspiration to me to sing, and his career can be a good example too.

'He is the energies to me' is incorrect; 'he is an inspiration to me' is correct. Also, 'to speak singing' is incorrect; 'to sing' is appropriate. 'A good thing to' is vague; 'a good example too' clarifies the meaning.

× I think singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× Everyone will listen to you and singing can make you more comfortable.

✓ Everyone will listen to you, and singing can make you feel more comfortable.

Adding a comma before 'and' improves sentence flow. Also, 'make you more comfortable' is better expressed as 'make you feel more comfortable' to clarify the effect.