唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然，存在语法错误和重复，建议简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因。

範例: Yes, I definitely like singing because I've wanted to learn it since I was a child.

建議: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，内容冗长且不连贯，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I have some experience singing. I joined a singing competition, but I didn't do well, so I gave up.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议使用更准确的表达方式，并注意句子结构。

範例: I prefer to sing for myself because it helps me relax and relieve stress.

建議: 回答中存在发音错误（sinking应为singing）、语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用正确词汇并组织连贯句子。

範例: Absolutely, singing brings happiness to people. When they are under a lot of pressure, singing helps them relieve stress and relax.

× Yeah, actually I have a experience about singing, yes, and I joined a cup which is for people to sing or share something skill, but it seems to be useless.

✓ Yeah, actually I have an experience about singing, yes, and I joined a cup which is for people to sing or share some skills, but it seems to be useless.

这里的“a experience”错误，experience是以元音音素开头的单词，前面应该用不定冠词“an”。另外，“something skill”应改为“some skills”，因为skill是可数名词，且此处表示复数。

× Yeah, actually I have a experience about singing, yes, and I joined a cup which is for people to sing or share something skill, but it seems to be useless.

✓ Yeah, actually I have an experience in singing, yes, and I joined a cup which is for people to sing or share some skills, but it seems to be useless.

“experience about singing”中的介词用法不正确，正确搭配是“experience in singing”，表示在某方面的经验。

× No, I just want to sing for myself 'cause I think singing is a helpful way for me to relax my emotions and also can bless my stress.

✓ No, I just want to sing for myself 'cause I think singing is a helpful way for me to relax my emotions and also can relieve my stress.

“bless my stress”用词不当，stress是不可数名词，且“bless”意思不符，应使用“relieve”表示缓解压力。

× No, I just want to sing for myself 'cause I think singing is a helpful way for me to relax my emotions and also can bless my stress.

✓ No, I just want to sing for myself 'cause I think singing is a helpful way for me to relax my emotions and also can relieve my stress.

“bless my stress”中的动词用法错误，应使用“relieve”来表达缓解压力的意思。

× Absolutely, sinking brings so many happiness to people like when people are under a lot of. A lot of pressures seeing is really useful for them to believe stress and also unwind themselves.

✓ Absolutely, singing brings so much happiness to people. Like when people are under a lot of pressure, singing is really useful for them to relieve stress and also unwind themselves.

“so many happiness”错误，happiness是不可数名词，应使用“so much happiness”。“a lot of pressures”中pressure通常不可数，改为“a lot of pressure”。另外，“believe stress”用词错误，应为“relieve stress”。

× Yeah, actually I have a experience about singing, yes, and I joined a cup which is for people to sing or share something skill, but it seems to be useless.

✓ Yeah, actually I have an experience in singing, yes, and I joined a competition which is for people to sing or share some skills, but it seemed to be useless.

句中“it seems to be useless”描述的是过去的经历，时态应使用过去式“seemed”。

× Who do you want to sing for? No, I just want to sing for myself 'cause I think singing is a helpful way for me to relax my emotions and also can bless my stress.

✓ Who do you want to sing for? I just want to sing for myself because I think singing is a helpful way for me to relax my emotions and also can relieve my stress.

回答中“No”用法不当，回答问题时直接说“No”显得不自然，应直接回答“I just want to sing for myself”。