唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and clarify your ideas. For example, instead of 'show my views of society and universe for the people,' you could say 'express my thoughts about society and the world.' Also, try to keep your answer within 3-4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it's a fun activity that allows me to express my thoughts about society and the world. It helps me connect with others and share my feelings through music.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be clearer. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific details. Use linking words to improve coherence. For example, mention the websites you use and why you find singing interesting.

範例: Yes, I have learned to sing using online websites like YouTube tutorials. I find singing interesting because it allows me to share my views with others and improve my vocal skills.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Also, it doesn't directly answer the question. Try to state who you want to sing for and why. Avoid saying 'forced me'; instead, express encouragement or support.

範例: I want to sing for my family and friends because they support me and enjoy my singing. My sister especially encourages me because she believes I have a clear voice.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat repetitive. Try to use linking words and correct verb forms. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people express their emotions and feel motivated. For example, singing uplifting songs can improve someone's mood and create a positive atmosphere.

× Yes, I like singing because it's a great activity and it is a method to show my views of society and universe for the people.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it's a great activity and it is a method to show my views on society and the universe to people.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used with 'views'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to opinions about a topic. Also, 'for the people' is better expressed as 'to people' to indicate the audience. Additionally, 'universe' should be preceded by 'the' as it is a unique entity.

× Yes, there are different websites which help to learn about singing and I also use the website to learn about singing because I think that singing is very interesting topic and it's a method to share my views to the society.

✓ Yes, there are different websites which help to learn about singing and I also use the website to learn about singing because I think that singing is a very interesting topic and it's a method to share my views with society.

The phrase 'share my views to the society' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with' when indicating sharing opinions. Also, 'interesting topic' needs the article 'a' before it.

× Yes, my sister forced me to do singing because she know that my voice is too clear and my thoughts about society is very good.

✓ Yes, my sister forced me to do singing because she knows that my voice is very clear and my thoughts about society are very good.

The verb 'know' must agree with the third person singular subject 'she', so it should be 'knows'. Also, 'thoughts' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Additionally, 'too clear' is awkward; 'very clear' is more appropriate.

× Yes, my sister forced me to do singing because she know that my voice is too clear and my thoughts about society is very good.

✓ Yes, my sister forced me to do singing because she knows that my voice is very clear and my thoughts about society are very good.

The subject 'thoughts' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'are' instead of singular 'is'.

× Yes, singing promote happiness as well as singing play an important role to motivate the people because singing is a way to share our views to the society.

✓ Yes, singing promotes happiness as well as singing plays an important role in motivating people because singing is a way to share our views with society.

The subject 'singing' is singular, so the verbs should be 'promotes' and 'plays' to agree in number. Also, 'play' should be 'plays'. The phrase 'to motivate the people' is better expressed as 'in motivating people'. The preposition 'to the society' should be 'with society'.