唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting filler words like 'uh'.

範例: No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my abilities. I usually prefer listening to music since I feel shy singing in front of others.

建議: Your response is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating the same reasons multiple times. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details.

範例: No, I have never taken formal singing classes because I lack confidence and feel shy singing in front of others. Therefore, I prefer listening to music instead.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains many filler words. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid unnecessary pauses. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I would like to sing for my family because they have always supported me. Group singing is a tradition at our family gatherings, and I feel comfortable and happy singing with them.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by hesitation and some unclear phrasing. Try to express your points clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid filler words to sound more confident.

範例: Yes, singing can make people happy because it helps them express emotions and relieve stress. Also, listening to music and memorizing lyrics can be very comforting.

× I usually prefer to listening music rather than singing because I'm not comfortable to sing a song in front of other people's.

✓ I usually prefer listening to music rather than singing because I'm not comfortable singing a song in front of other people.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form 'listening' not the infinitive 'to listening'. Also, 'prefer listening to music' is the correct prepositional phrase. Additionally, 'comfortable to sing' should be 'comfortable singing' because 'comfortable' is followed by a gerund. 'Other people's' is incorrect; it should be 'other people' without the possessive form.

× I feel very shy when I singing in front of other people and I feel very uncomfortable uh to sing a song and uh instead, I usually prefer to listening music instead of UH.

✓ I feel very shy when I sing in front of other people and I feel very uncomfortable singing a song and instead, I usually prefer listening to music.

After 'when', the verb should be in base form 'sing' not 'singing'. 'Uncomfortable to sing' should be 'uncomfortable singing' because 'uncomfortable' is followed by a gerund. 'Prefer to listening' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer listening to'.

× I'm not comfortable to sing a song in front of other people's.

✓ I'm not comfortable singing a song in front of other people.

'Other people's' is a possessive form and incorrect here; it should be 'other people' as a plural noun without possessive.

× I feel very uncomfortable uh to sing a song

✓ I feel very uncomfortable singing a song

'Uncomfortable' is followed by a gerund form of the verb, so 'to sing' should be 'singing'.

× I usually prefer to listening music

✓ I usually prefer listening to music

'Prefer' is followed by the gerund form without 'to', and 'listening to music' is the correct phrase.

× I feel very shy when I singing in front of other people

✓ I feel very shy when I sing in front of other people

After 'when', the verb should be in base form 'sing' not 'singing'.

× I usually prefer to listening music instead of UH.

✓ I usually prefer listening to music instead of that.

'Prefer' should be followed by gerund without 'to', and 'listening to music' is correct. 'Instead of UH' is incomplete; 'that' or a proper noun should be used.

× And it was a great experience and I feel over the moon and uh, they always.

✓ It was a great experience, and I felt over the moon because they always support me.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'I feel' should be past tense 'I felt' to match 'was'. The phrase 'and uh, they always' is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.

× people can listen the music and uh, and memori memorize the lyrics.

✓ people can listen to music and memorize the lyrics.

'Listen' is followed by the preposition 'to', so 'listen the music' should be 'listen to music'. Also, 'memori memorize' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'memorize'.