唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Intenta usar oraciones más naturales y evita errores gramaticales. Por ejemplo, en lugar de "I say that I do not like singing", puedes decir "I don't really like singing". Además, usa preposiciones correctas como "listen to music" en lugar de "listen music".

範例: I don't really like singing because my voice sounds sharp and unclear, but I enjoy listening to music.

建議: Mejora la estructura gramatical y la coherencia. Por ejemplo, usa tiempos verbales correctos y conecta ideas con palabras de enlace. En lugar de "the music subject is was compulsory", di "music was a compulsory subject".

範例: Yes, when I was in 11th grade, music was a compulsory subject. At that time, I tried to sing but I wasn't successful because my voice was unclear and a bit sharp.

建議: Evita errores de vocabulario y gramática, y usa conectores para mejorar la fluidez. Por ejemplo, "Epically" no es correcto; usa "Especially". Además, la frase "as you enjoy to our home" no es clara; intenta reformularla para expresar la idea correctamente.

範例: Well, as I mentioned, my voice is a bit unclear and sharp, so I usually avoid singing. However, if I had the chance, I would sing for my family, especially my mother, because I love them very much. Singing makes me feel happy and brings joy to our home.

建議: Mejora la precisión gramatical y usa vocabulario más adecuado. Por ejemplo, en lugar de "which boost their confidence", usa "which boosts their confidence". También, intenta usar conectores para que la respuesta sea más coherente.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions. For example, when someone feels stressed, they can listen to or sing music, which boosts their confidence and reduces stress levels.

× I like to listen music.

✓ I like to listen to music.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Omitting 'to' is a common error. The correct phrase is 'listen to music.'

× when I was in 11th class the music subject is was compulsory for every student.

✓ when I was in 11th class the music subject was compulsory for every student.

The phrase 'is was' is incorrect because it mixes present and past tense. Since the sentence refers to a past time, the correct verb is 'was.'

× That time I tried to sing but I failed because my voice is quite unclear and bit sharp.

✓ That time I tried to sing but I failed because my voice was quite unclear and a bit sharp.

The description of the voice refers to the past, so the verb 'is' should be in past tense 'was.' Also, 'bit sharp' needs the article 'a' before 'bit.'

× I like to listen music.

✓ I like to listen to music.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Omitting 'to' is a common error. The correct phrase is 'listen to music.'

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I already mentioned that my voice is a bit unclear and slightly sharp, so I usually avoid singing.

✓ I already mentioned that my voice is a bit unclear and slightly sharp, so I usually avoid singing.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× However, if I had the chance to sing, I would sing for my family because I love them very much, my mother.

✓ However, if I had the chance to sing, I would sing for my family because I love them very much, especially my mother.

The word 'Epically' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'especially' to emphasize the mother.

× Epically, I feel happy when I sing as you enjoy to our home.

✓ Especially, I feel happy when I sing as you enjoy at our home.

The word 'Epically' is a misspelling of 'Especially.' Also, 'enjoy to our home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' in this context.

× when someone feels stressed, then he or she can listen to or sing music which boost their confidence and reduce the stress level.

✓ when someone feels stressed, then he or she can listen to or sing music which boosts their confidence and reduces the stress level.

The verbs 'boost' and 'reduce' should be in third person singular form 'boosts' and 'reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'music.'