唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，并且补充具体细节。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a busy day. On weekends, I often sing with my friends, which makes me feel happy and connected.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且补充更多细节使回答更丰富。

範例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. When I was a child, my parents wanted me to attend a music school, but they decided that academic studies were more important, so I went to a regular school instead.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，表达更流畅，并且补充具体原因。

範例: I would like to sing for my grandparents because I rarely get to visit them. When I was a student, I spent most of my time at school or in the city with my friends, so singing for them would be a way to show my love.

建議: 回答中有发音和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复，并且具体说明感受。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, I attended JJ Lin's concert last month, and his singing made me feel joyful and touched.

× Yeah, I do like singing because singing has helped me to relax and I think, I think scale is good.

✓ Yeah, I do like singing because singing has helped me to relax and I think scales are good.

这里'scale'应该用复数形式'scales'，因为指的是音乐中的音阶，通常是复数。

× And I always tell the Kitty with my friend when we're in weekend.

✓ And I always sing with my friend on weekends.

'tell the Kitty'不合适，应该是'sing'。'when we're in weekend'应改为'on weekends'，表示在周末。

× No, but when I was a when I was a child, my parents wanted to send me to a musical school, but finally they think the study is important so I got the normal normal school.

✓ No, but when I was a child, my parents wanted to send me to a music school, but finally they thought studying was more important so I went to a normal school.

时态应保持一致，'think'应为过去式'thought'，'got'改为'went'更合适。'musical school'应为'music school'。

× I think I want to think for my grandparents because when I was a graduate undergraduate, I always be in school or in cities with my friend.

✓ I think I want to sing for my grandparents because when I was an undergraduate, I was always at school or in the city with my friends.

'want to think for'应为'want to sing for'。'graduate undergraduate'用词重复且不准确，改为'an undergraduate'。'be'应为过去式'was'。'in cities'改为'in the city'更自然。'friend'应为复数'friends'。

× I hardly back to the countryside to with my grandparents.

✓ I hardly went back to the countryside to see my grandparents.

'hardly back'缺少动词，改为'hardly went back'。'to with'结构错误，改为'to see'。

× Yes, I do think seeing can bring the happiness to people because last month I said I went to JJ Lin's concert and I think the singing his son does bring the happiness and romantic to me.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because last month I went to JJ Lin's concert and I think his singing brought happiness and romance to me.

'seeing'应为'singing'。'I said I went'中'said'多余，应去掉。'the singing his son does'结构错误，改为'his singing'。'bring the happiness and romantic'应为'bring happiness and romance'。