唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议你直接回答问题，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并且避免重复和不必要的词汇。可以先给出一个主题句，然后用具体的细节支持。

範例: Yes, I like singing because I enjoy Korean music. I often listen to it when I want to relax, and singing helps me improve my vocal skills, especially when I try to reach high notes.

建議: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误。建议你直接回答是否学过唱歌，并用连词连接细节，表达更连贯。

範例: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I often sing along with original singers, which helps me practice and improve my singing skills.

建議: 回答不明确且表达混乱。建议你直接回答问题，说明你想为谁唱歌，并用具体理由支持。

範例: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because I feel comfortable with them and they always support me.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误。建议你直接表达观点，使用连词使句子更流畅，并给出具体原因。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is a fun activity that helps me relax and enjoy myself.

× I'm very like Korean music and I often see them when I was want to relax.

✓ I really like Korean music and I often listen to it when I want to relax.

The phrase 'very like' is incorrect; 'really like' is the proper expression. 'See them' is incorrect when referring to music; 'listen to it' is correct. Also, 'when I was want to relax' is grammatically wrong; it should be 'when I want to relax' to match the present tense context.

× It also can practice me when I sing the high level.

✓ It also helps me practice when I sing at a high level.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrectly used here. Instead, 'helps me practice' is the correct expression. Also, 'practice me' is incorrect; the verb 'practice' is intransitive here and should be used with 'helps me practice'. 'The high level' should be 'at a high level' to indicate degree.

× Yes or no I mean I'm not ever going to the music class to learn how to sing, but I often sing with the people who was the 1st to sing this song and I think it can practice my singing level and can practice me and.

✓ Not really. I mean, I have never gone to music classes to learn how to sing, but I often sing with people who were the first to sing this song, and I think it helps me improve my singing level.

'I'm not ever going' is incorrect; 'I have never gone' is the correct present perfect tense. 'People who was' should be 'people who were' to agree in number. 'Can practice my singing level and can practice me' is incorrect; 'helps me improve my singing level' is the proper expression.

× Who do you want to sing for? Questionable because you know, in the music world I'm not diving in it and I'm very shy in this world.

✓ That's a difficult question because, you know, I'm not involved in the music world and I'm very shy in this area.

'Questionable' is not used correctly here; 'That's a difficult question' is more appropriate. 'I'm not diving in it' is incorrect; 'I'm not involved in it' is correct. 'In this world' is vague; 'in this area' or 'in this field' is better.

× So I think it's same for me. And I never seem to another never.

✓ So I think it's the same for me. And I have never performed for others.

'It's same' should be 'it's the same' to include the definite article. 'I never seem to another never' is ungrammatical; likely intended meaning is 'I have never performed for others'.

× I don't know it can bring happiness to anyone, but I think yes, 'cause you know, I think seeing can bring some happiness and some fun to people and that is what I want.

✓ I don't know if it can bring happiness to everyone, but I think yes, because singing can bring some happiness and fun to people, and that is what I want.

'I don't know it can bring' should be 'I don't know if it can bring' to introduce a conditional clause. 'Seeing' is a typo; should be 'singing'. 'Some fun to people' is acceptable but 'fun to people' is more natural.

× I always want to relax when I sing.

✓ I always want to relax when I sing.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.