唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and shows personality, but avoid rhetorical questions like "Who doesn't like singing?" as it can sound less formal. Also, try to be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I am not very good at it and usually sing only when I am alone, like in the bathroom.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Use correct tense and structure, and be specific about your intentions. Also, avoid mixing tenses and be clear whether you have taken classes or plan to take them.

範例: I have never learned how to sing formally, but I would like to take singing classes at a music institution in the future.

建議: Your answer shows emotion but has repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to form clear sentences with correct grammar and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: I like to sing for my mother because she has supported me throughout my childhood. Even if I sing badly, I want to sing for her to show my appreciation.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, explain your points with linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it releases dopamine and endorphins, which are chemicals that make us feel good emotionally.

× I've never tried before, but yeah, I would like to learn some music in a music institutions or I'm taking some classes from there.

✓ I've never tried before, but yeah, I would like to learn some music at a music institution or take some classes there.

The modal verb 'would like to' is correctly used to express desire. However, the phrase 'in a music institutions' is incorrect due to plural 'institutions' with singular article 'a'. Also, 'I'm taking some classes from there' is awkward; it should be 'take some classes there' to match the intended meaning and parallel structure.

× I've never tried before, but yeah, I would like to learn some music in a music institutions or I'm taking some classes from there.

✓ I've never tried before, but yeah, I would like to learn some music at a music institution or take some classes there.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'music institutions'; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to attending an institution. Also, 'from there' is unnecessary and awkward; 'there' suffices.

× I like to sing for my mother because she's been so supportive from my whole from my childhood and I like to sing for her either.

✓ I like to sing for my mother because she's been so supportive throughout my whole childhood and I like to sing for her too.

The pronoun 'either' is incorrectly used; 'too' is appropriate to express 'also'. Additionally, 'from my whole from my childhood' is incorrect; 'throughout my whole childhood' is the correct phrase.

× If I'm singing terrible, I I want to sing for her.

✓ Even if I sing terribly, I want to sing for her.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'If I'm singing terrible' should be 'Even if I sing terribly' to express concession. Also, 'terrible' is an adjective; the adverb 'terribly' is needed to modify the verb 'sing'. The repeated 'I' is a typo and removed.

× I like to sing for my mother because she's been so supportive from my whole from my childhood and I like to sing for her either.

✓ I like to sing for my mother because she's been so supportive throughout my whole childhood and I like to sing for her too.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used with 'my whole childhood'; the correct preposition is 'throughout' to indicate the entire duration.

× Yes, singing makes people more emotionally attached with them and it's releases dopamine and the endorphins and it makes so much happy.

✓ Yes, singing makes people more emotionally attached to each other, and it releases dopamine and endorphins, making them very happy.

The pronoun 'them' is unclear and incorrectly used; 'each other' clarifies mutual attachment. 'It's releases' is incorrect; 'it releases' is correct. 'The endorphins' should be 'endorphins' without 'the'. 'It makes so much happy' is incorrect; 'making them very happy' correctly conveys the meaning.