唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use more natural expressions and correct minor errors. For example, say "natural talent" instead of "nature talent" and avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. Also, keep sentences concise and clear.

範例: Honestly, singing isn't really my thing because I don't think I have a good voice. While many people enjoy singing and have a natural talent for it, I find it hard to sing well. So, I usually avoid singing in front of others.

建議: Focus on clarity and correct word choice. For example, use "quit" instead of "quiet" and rephrase unclear parts like "I prefer the other activity that's used my interest better" to more natural English. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition.

範例: I remember when I was young, my school offered a singing course, and I took part for a while. However, I wasn't very interested in it, so I decided to quit and focus on other activities that matched my interests better.

建議: Good answer with clear ideas and supporting details. To improve, correct minor mistakes like "sinking skill" to "singing skill" and try to use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas more smoothly.

範例: As I said, I'm not confident about my singing skills, so I avoid singing in public. But I enjoy singing to my son Osama, especially when he's sleepy because it creates a peaceful atmosphere that helps him relax and fall asleep. It also makes me feel happy and closer to him.

建議: Very good answer with clear opinion and examples. To improve further, try to add linking words like "for instance" or "therefore" to make the answer more coherent and use a wider range of vocabulary related to emotions and benefits.

範例: In my opinion, singing is an excellent way to release energy and reduce stress. It helps many people relax and improve their mood, so they feel happier and more positive. For instance, when I sing, I usually feel more energetic and less worried.

× Although many people like to sing and have a nature talent through it, I find it difficult to sing well.

✓ Although many people like to sing and have a natural talent for it, I find it difficult to sing well.

The adjective 'nature' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'natural' to describe 'talent'. Also, the preposition 'through' is incorrect; 'for' is the proper preposition to indicate the object of talent.

× As I remember, when I was young, my school organized a singing course for the students and I practiced in it for a while.

✓ As I remember, when I was young, my school organized a singing course for the students and I practiced it for a while.

The verb 'practiced' should be followed directly by the object 'it' without the preposition 'in'. The phrase 'practiced in it' is incorrect.

× However, I wasn't very interested in that kind of musical training, so I eventually decided to quiet the course I prefer.

✓ However, I wasn't very interested in that kind of musical training, so I eventually decided to quit the course I preferred.

The verb 'quiet' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'quit' meaning to stop. Also, 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match the past context.

× I prefer the other activity that's used my interest better.

✓ I prefer the other activity that suits my interests better.

The phrase 'that's used my interest better' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'that suits my interests better' to indicate the activity matches the speaker's interests.

× As I mentioned, I'm not very confident about my sinking skill, so I don't like singing in public.

✓ As I mentioned, I'm not very confident about my singing skill, so I don't like singing in public.

The word 'sinking' is a typo; the correct word is 'singing' to refer to the skill of singing.