唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法和表达错误，如“it's not translate”应为“it doesn't translate”。内容有些重复且不够连贯，建议简化表达，避免冗余，并注意语法准确。

範例: No, I don't like singing myself, but I enjoy listening to others sing. I wish I had the talent, but unfortunately, my voice changed a lot during puberty, which affected my singing ability.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“didn't excel for it”应为“didn't excel at it”，句子未完整表达“stopped singing in front of”谁。建议注意语法准确，句子完整，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, my mom enrolled me in singing lessons when I was a child because I was interested at that time. However, I didn't excel at it, and after puberty, my voice changed, so I stopped singing in front of others.

建議: 回答中有明显语法和用词错误，如“sing world”应为“sing well”，“compensate my voice”表达不当。句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，使用正确词汇，并保持句意清晰。

範例: Since I can't sing well, if I had to sing for someone, it would probably be my future children. I would sing to them when they are babies because they wouldn't mind my poor singing.

建議: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但部分表达不够准确，如“people say music is a language they appreciate”可更自然表达。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music is a universal language that people enjoy. When I feel down, I listen to inspirational songs to lift my mood, and I think many others do the same.

× My voice always broke when I hit the puberty.

✓ My voice always broke when I hit puberty.

“puberty”前不需要加定冠词“the”，因为“puberty”是不可数名词，表示生理阶段，通常不加冠词。

× I didn't excel for it.

✓ I didn't excel at it.

动词“excel”后应接介词“at”表示擅长某事，不能用“for”。

× When I hit the puberty it was all downhill so I stopped singing in front of.

✓ When I hit puberty, it was all downhill, so I stopped singing in front of others.

句子缺少宾语，导致结构不完整，应补充“others”使句子完整。

× Since I don't know how to sing world, if I have to sing to someone, it would probably to be my future children.

✓ Since I don't know how to sing well, if I have to sing to someone, it would probably be my future children.

“world”应为“well”，表示“唱得好”；“to be”多余，应改为“be”。

× I will sing to them when they are still babies so they are not able to compensate my voice.

✓ I will sing to them when they are still babies so they are not able to compare my voice.

“compensate”用错，正确应为“compare”，表示“比较”。

× Yes, people say music is a language they appreciate, so it can bring happiness to people if the song is sung well.

✓ Yes, people say music is a language they appreciate, so it can bring happiness to people if songs are sung well.

“the song”应改为复数“songs”，因为泛指歌曲。

× When I'm feeling that, I listen to inspirational songs to uplift myself and I know others do the same.

✓ When I'm feeling that way, I listen to inspirational songs to uplift myself and I know others do the same.

“feeling that”不完整，应为“feeling that way”，表示“感觉那样”。