唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant and provides reasons, but there are some language inaccuracies and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use clearer expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences for conciseness.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress. Additionally, singing with friends at karaoke strengthens our friendship and creates joyful memories.

建議: Your answer addresses the question and adds interesting details, but some phrases are unnatural, such as "a little bit pitiful" and "never accept any professional singing training." Try to use more natural expressions and improve sentence flow.

範例: No, I have never taken professional singing lessons. However, my friends often tell me that I sing well, and some even jokingly call me the "Chinese Adele."

建議: Your answer shows willingness to sing for others, but some sentences are unclear or incorrect, such as "I'm a synonym to celebrate." Try to use clearer, more natural sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: It depends on the occasion. For instance, I like to sing for my friends on their birthdays to celebrate. I also enjoy singing at graduation parties to congratulate them.

建議: There are several language errors and unclear phrases, such as "seeing" instead of "singing" and "the lighters." Make sure to use correct vocabulary and clear expressions. Also, organize your ideas logically with linking words.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. It helps people relieve work stress, and singing together can create a joyful atmosphere that makes people forget their worries.

× Well, yes, I'm kind of saying, and for that reason, personally, I think singing is a very efficient way to release my pressure.

✓ Well, yes, I'm kind of singing, and for that reason, personally, I think singing is a very efficient way to release my pressure.

The phrase 'I'm kind of saying' is incorrect because 'saying' is not the intended verb here. The student likely meant 'singing' to express their interest in the activity. Using the correct verb form clarifies the meaning.

× And socially, I think when you and your friends go to the karaoke and sing is a very quick way to help you find your own friendship bond.

✓ And socially, I think when you and your friends go to karaoke and sing, it is a very quick way to help you find your own friendship bond.

The phrase 'go to the karaoke' is incorrect because 'karaoke' is an uncountable noun here and does not require the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence was missing a subject for the second clause; adding 'it' clarifies the sentence structure.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past participle form, while 'learned' is the American English equivalent. Since the explanation is in American English, 'learned' is preferred for consistency.

× I think it might be a little bit pitiful for me that I never accept any professional singing training.

✓ I think it might be a little bit pitiful for me that I have never received any professional singing training.

The verb 'accept' is not appropriate here; 'receive' is the correct verb to use with 'training'. Also, the present perfect tense 'have never received' is suitable to express an experience up to now.

× Some of them even called me Chinese Adele.

✓ Some of them have even called me the Chinese Adele.

Adding 'have' forms the present perfect tense, which is appropriate for experiences up to now. Also, adding the definite article 'the' before 'Chinese Adele' is correct because it refers to a specific nickname.

× I might sing for them to celebrate their birthday.

✓ I might sing for them to celebrate their birthdays.

Since 'them' refers to multiple friends, 'birthdays' should be plural to match the plural pronoun.

× And when some of my friends graduate from university, I'm a synonym to celebrate for their graduation.

✓ And when some of my friends graduate from university, I sing to celebrate their graduation.

The phrase 'I'm a synonym to celebrate' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'I sing to celebrate' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Well, surely, I think seeing can definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ Well, surely, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

The word 'seeing' is a typo or mishearing; the correct word is 'singing' to match the context of the conversation.

× On one hand, I think seeing can be a very efficient way to release 1's work pressure, and on the other hand, the lighters can also make people to forget all the burdens they have in their life and live a happier life.

✓ On one hand, I think singing can be a very efficient way to release one's work pressure, and on the other hand, the lights can also help people forget all the burdens they have in their life and live a happier life.

'Seeing' should be 'singing' to fit the context. '1's' is a typo and should be 'one's' to indicate possession. 'Lighters' is incorrect; 'lights' is the correct word to refer to small light sources at events. Also, 'make people to forget' should be 'help people forget' because 'make' is followed by the base verb without 'to'.