唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，存在重复和错误。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and forget about work stress. I especially like singing alone as it allows me to express my feelings.

建議: 回答中有多处语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，避免重复词汇，并清楚描述学习经历。

範例: Yes, I joined a singing club with my colleagues last year that lasted for about two months. We met once a week to learn musical techniques, which helped improve our singing skills.

建議: 回答表达了情感，但语法和表达不够准确。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免不必要的重复。

範例: I would like to sing for my grandmother because she raised me and has been a great role model throughout my life.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，注意主谓一致，并具体说明唱歌带来的好处。

範例: Definitely, singing can bring happiness because the rhythm and meaningful lyrics help people relax and forget their daily stress.

× Listening to music make me feel more relaxed and I can forget all about the annoying things at work, so I like to think myself.

✓ Listening to music makes me feel more relaxed and I can forget all about the annoying things at work, so I like to think to myself.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'Listening to music' (third person singular). Also, the phrase 'think myself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive form is 'think to myself'.

× As a matter of fact, my colleagues and I enjoyed a singing club last year and it lasts lasted about two months.

✓ As a matter of fact, my colleagues and I enjoyed a singing club last year and it lasted about two months.

The verb 'lasts' is incorrect in past tense context; it should be 'lasted' to match the past tense 'enjoyed'.

× We had one close each each week to learn about the musical techniques when we're seeing it was quite helpful because our ability increase.

✓ We had one class each week to learn about musical techniques, and it was quite helpful because our ability increased.

The phrase 'one close each each week' is incorrect; it should be 'one class each week'. 'When we're seeing' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'and it was'. Also, 'our ability increase' should be 'our ability increased' to match past tense.

× A little shy to answer this question because the exact person I want to sing for is definitely my grandma.

✓ I am a little shy to answer this question because the exact person I want to sing for is definitely my grandma.

The original sentence lacks a subject; adding 'I am' corrects the sentence structure and pronoun usage.

× I think I have a strong connection with her because she not only raise me up but also she's all she is, a model on my path of growing up.

✓ I think I have a strong connection with her because she not only raised me up but also she is a model on my path of growing up.

The verb 'raise' should be in past tense 'raised' to agree with the past action. The phrase 'she's all she is' is incorrect and unnecessary; it should be 'she is a model'.

× Definitely, I think the rhythm of a song and the lyrics the song expresses makes makes people feel relaxed and away from the stressful things they have in their daily life or at their work.

✓ Definitely, I think the rhythm of a song and the lyrics the song expresses make people feel relaxed and away from the stressful things they have in their daily life or at their work.

The subject is compound ('the rhythm of a song and the lyrics'), so the verb should be plural 'make' instead of singular 'makes'. Also, 'makes makes' is a repetition error.

× It not only help us but also make us happy.

✓ It not only helps us but also makes us happy.

The verb should be in third person singular form 'helps' and 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'It'.