唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta singkat. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan struktur kalimat yang jelas agar jawaban lebih efektif.

範例: I don't like singing because I can't sing well. Whenever I try, people say my voice sounds soft, which makes me feel embarrassed, so I usually avoid singing in public.

建議: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan singkat. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan kata yang tepat untuk menyampaikan ide dengan jelas.

範例: I haven't learned to sing because it's not my passion. However, I enjoy listening to music a lot.

建議: Perjelas jawaban dengan kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

範例: I don't want to sing for anyone because, according to my religion, singing is considered Haram.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta lengkap. Tambahkan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih logis.

範例: It depends on the type of songs you sing. If you sing sad songs, it's hard to feel happy.

× I don't like singing because I cannot singing well and whenever I try to sing people say my voices sound softly which make me feel a bit embarrassed so I usually avoid staying in public.

✓ I don't like singing because I cannot sing well and whenever I try to sing people say my voice sounds soft which makes me feel a bit embarrassed so I usually avoid staying in public.

The verb 'cannot' should be followed by the base form 'sing' not 'singing' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Voices' should be singular 'voice' to match the subject (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'Sound softly' is incorrect; 'sound' should be followed by an adjective, so 'soft' is correct (Grammar Problem Type 13). 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'voice' (Grammar Problem Type 27).

× I haven't learned anything because I think that's not my passion and I don't like singing, but I like music.

✓ I haven't learned anything because I think that's not my passion and I don't like singing, but I like music.

No correction needed here as the sentence uses present perfect 'haven't learned' correctly and the rest is in present tense as appropriate.

× I love to listen to the music.

✓ I love to listen to music.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'music' when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence correct (Grammar Problem Type 17).

× No one you know, in my religion singing is Haram.

✓ No one, you know, in my religion singing is Haram.

The phrase 'No one you know' is unclear and awkward. Adding commas clarifies the sentence structure. Alternatively, 'No one' alone suffices. The pronoun usage is acceptable but punctuation improves clarity (Grammar Problem Type 12).

× It's depend on what songs you sing.

✓ It depends on what songs you sing.

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the subject 'It' (Grammar Problem Type 2).

× If you sing a sad song, how you can be happy.

✓ If you sing a sad song, how can you be happy?

The sentence is a question and requires inversion of subject and auxiliary verb: 'how can you be happy?' (Grammar Problem Type 26).