唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ như giải thích rõ lý do không thích hát và sở thích liên quan đến âm nhạc.

範例: No, I don't enjoy singing because I think my voice is quite quiet. However, I love listening to music and sometimes I go to karaoke with my friends for fun.

建議: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về việc học hát.

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing from my friend who is a good singer. She taught me some techniques when we sang together.

建議: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có lỗi lặp từ và cấu trúc câu chưa mượt mà. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I want to sing for my husband on special occasions like our wedding day, anniversary, Valentine's Day, or his birthday. Singing romantic songs makes me feel comfortable and helps me express my love for him.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời đúng ý nhưng có lỗi dùng từ (thinking thay vì singing) và câu chưa rõ ràng. Hãy chú ý dùng từ chính xác và cấu trúc câu mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Absolutely. Singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I feel angry, singing helps me relax and feel joyful. It also allows people to express their emotions through songs.

× Absolutely no.

✓ Absolutely not.

The phrase 'Absolutely no' is incorrect because 'no' is a determiner and cannot stand alone as an adverbial response. The correct adverbial negation is 'Absolutely not.' This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× my voice is not too silent.

✓ my voice is not very soft.

The adjective 'silent' means 'completely quiet' and is not appropriate to describe a voice that is not loud. 'Soft' is a better adjective to describe a quiet voice. Also, 'too silent' is awkward; 'very soft' is more natural.

× But I like to listen to music by so I like go and I like to go to karaoke with my friend.

✓ But I like to listen to music, so I like to go to karaoke with my friend.

The phrase 'listen to music by' is incomplete and incorrect; 'by' is unnecessary here. Also, 'I like go' is missing 'to' before 'go'. The corrected sentence removes 'by' and adds 'to' before 'go' for grammatical correctness.

× I have learned how to think from my friend.

✓ I have learned how to sing from my friend.

The word 'think' is incorrect in context; the student likely meant 'sing'. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but correcting it is necessary for meaning.

× He is a good singer and she teach me so much when we sing together.

✓ He is a good singer and he teaches me so much when we sing together.

The pronoun 'she' is inconsistent with 'He' and should be 'he' to refer to the same person. Also, 'teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with third person singular subject.

× See for example he taught me learn how to think.

✓ For example, he taught me how to sing.

The phrase 'taught me learn' is incorrect; it should be 'taught me how to sing'. Also, 'think' is incorrect in context; 'sing' is appropriate. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I want to sing for my husband in some special occasions such as wedding day, anniversary or Valentine or his birthday.

✓ I want to sing for my husband on special occasions such as our wedding day, anniversary, Valentine's Day, or his birthday.

'Wedding day' and 'Valentine' need articles and correct forms: 'wedding day' should be preceded by 'our' or 'the', and 'Valentine' should be 'Valentine's Day'. Also, 'some special occasions' is correct but 'on' is the correct preposition for days/events.

× Sometimes I think some some romantic song make me feel comfortable and can show my love for him.

✓ Sometimes I think some romantic songs make me feel comfortable and can show my love for him.

The word 'some' is repeated twice erroneously. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to agree with 'some'. The verb 'make' agrees with plural subject 'songs'.

× Absolutely. Thinking can bring happiness to people.

✓ Absolutely. Singing can bring happiness to people.

The word 'Thinking' is incorrect in context; the student likely meant 'Singing'. This is a vocabulary error but important for meaning.

× You can try when you feel that angry, you can sing out and the song make you feel blissful.

✓ You can try it when you feel angry; you can sing out and the song makes you feel blissful.

The phrase 'feel that angry' is incorrect; it should be 'feel angry'. Also, 'sing out' is acceptable but 'the song make' should be 'the song makes' to agree with singular subject. Added 'it' after 'try' for clarity.

× Yeah, sometimes you can show the feeling in the songs.

✓ Yeah, sometimes you can show the feelings in the songs.

The noun 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the plural 'songs'. This is a quantifier issue but also affects subject-verb agreement.