唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by directly stating your feelings about singing. Avoid unclear phrases and focus on expressing how singing affects you personally. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid unnecessary words.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it boosts my energy and helps me feel happy throughout the day.

建議: Improve your answer by using correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structure. Explain your learning method more naturally and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons. I usually learn by listening to songs and trying to sing along, which helps me improve gradually.

建議: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar mistakes. Be specific about why you want to sing for your husband and how it makes you feel.

範例: I want to sing for my husband because he enjoys listening to me. When we have free time, we listen to music together, and singing for him makes both of us happy and relaxed.

建議: Clarify your answer by using correct grammar and vocabulary. Explain how singing helps reduce stress and improves mood with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps reduce stress and improves our mental state, which has a positive effect on people's emotions.

× Yes I like her singing because it boost up my energy and leukemia real feel so that I can enjoy my day and whenever I am.

✓ Yes, I like her singing because it boosts up my energy and makes me feel real so that I can enjoy my day wherever I am.

The verb 'boost' should be in the third person singular form 'boosts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear; 'leukemia real feel' seems incorrect and is replaced with 'makes me feel real' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't learn singing.

✓ No, I haven't learned singing.

The present tense 'don't learn' is incorrect when referring to past experience. The present perfect 'haven't learned' is appropriate to indicate that the action of learning singing has not occurred up to now.

× I just learned from whenever I play a song I just hear them and try to sing.

✓ I just learn by listening whenever I play a song and try to sing.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'learn' and 'listen' are appropriate. Also, 'hear them' is replaced with 'listening' for natural expression.

× That's the only way I just learn.

✓ That's the only way I learn.

The adverb 'just' is redundant and disrupts sentence flow. Removing it improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× He like to listen to me so when we are free we just listen music.

✓ He likes to listen to me, so when we are free, we just listen to music.

The verb 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'He'. Also, 'listen music' requires the preposition 'to' to be correct.

× So after that I just sing a song for him and he's very happy for dad and that's give me energy and relaxation throughout the day.

✓ So after that, I just sing a song for him and he's very happy, and that gives me energy and relaxation throughout the day.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. Also, 'happy for dad' is unclear and likely a mistake; it is omitted for clarity.

× Yes, I believe so because if we are in a stress or distraction on something, so if we are seeing so all of the mental states going be good and that's it make a positive effect on people.

✓ Yes, I believe so because if we are stressed or distracted by something, then all of our mental states will be good and that makes a positive effect on people.

The phrase 'in a stress or distraction on something' is incorrect; it should be 'stressed or distracted by something'. Also, 'seeing' is incorrect and replaced with 'then', and verb forms are corrected for subject-verb agreement and tense.