唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer wa eigo no shizen-sa ga tarinai desu. Taisetsu na pointo o chokusetsu kotae, fukusetsu no jisho o tsukatte hanasu koto ga hitsuyou desu. Tatoeba, 'I like singing because it makes me feel happy and excited. Singing is a fun activity that I enjoy with others.' no you ni, motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

範例: I like singing because it makes me feel happy and excited. It is a fun activity that I enjoy doing with my friends and family.

建議: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto shizen de wakariyasui eigo de kotaete kudasai. Tatoeba, 'No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I have learned by watching famous singers and imitating their style.' no you ni setsumei shite kudasai.

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I have learned by watching famous singers and trying to sing like them.

建議: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, hanashi no nagare ga wakari nikui desu. Chokusetsu shite, motto meikaku ni kotaete kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I want to sing for a large audience, maybe thousands of people, because I enjoy performing on big stages.' no you ni hanashite kudasai.

範例: I want to sing for a large audience, maybe thousands of people, because I enjoy performing on big stages.

建議: Kotae ga sukoshi fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto meikaku ni setsumei shi, rikai shi yasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and feel better.' no you ni kotaete kudasai.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and feel better.

× I like singing is because actually I'm an artist.

✓ I like singing because actually I'm an artist.

The sentence has an unnecessary 'is' which breaks the sentence structure. Removing 'is' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× It's not big size of stuff.

✓ It's not a big thing.

The phrase 'big size of stuff' is awkward and incorrect. Using 'a big thing' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× And then we can enjoy whatever everybody.

✓ And then we can enjoy it with everybody.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'it with' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× No, I haven't picked but I've learned from the famous artist the way they singing what they are singing or with their using their thought toward mouth so.

✓ No, I haven't taken lessons but I've learned from famous artists by watching how they sing and how they use their mouth.

The original sentence misuses 'picked' and has incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. Correcting modal verb usage and verb forms improves clarity and grammar.

× I do like to sing for the massive audience to NASA buildings with 4000 people or 400 people, whatever.

✓ I like to sing for a massive audience in NASA buildings with 4000 people or 400 people, whatever.

The phrase 'massive audience to NASA buildings' is incorrect. Using 'a massive audience in NASA buildings' corrects the preposition and article usage.

× I don't think sing.

✓ I don't think I sing for just one person.

The original sentence lacks a subject and is incomplete. Adding 'I' and completing the thought corrects the pronoun use and sentence structure.

× I don't sing for like a person, the one person.

✓ I don't sing for just one person.

The phrase 'like a person, the one person' is awkward and incorrect. Simplifying to 'just one person' improves clarity and grammar.

× So yeah, to a massive.

✓ So yeah, I prefer singing to a massive audience.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Completing the sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× It's difficult, but I think it brings people happiness sometimes because the singing is very emotional experience.

✓ It's difficult, but I think it sometimes brings people happiness because singing is a very emotional experience.

The sentence has awkward word order and missing articles. Rearranging words and adding 'a' before 'very emotional experience' corrects the sentence.

× So if you sing like you're an anxious, you'd be anxious, but you can sing it.

✓ So if you sing when you're anxious, you'd be anxious, but you can still sing.

The phrase 'like you're an anxious' is incorrect. Using 'when you're anxious' and simplifying the sentence improves grammar and clarity.