唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I am stressed, singing my favorite songs makes me feel happier and more energetic.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh trả lời mơ hồ hoặc không liên quan. Sử dụng câu chủ đề và từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: No, I have never formally learnt how to sing, but I enjoy singing casually with my friends during gatherings.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều ý không liên quan. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích hoặc đưa ví dụ cụ thể, sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I would like to sing for my parents because they have always supported me. Singing for them would be a way to show my gratitude and love.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích hoặc đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and enjoy music. For instance, many people feel joyful when they sing along to their favorite songs at karaoke.

× Pretty young because I shattered a lot of time with my friends during Total War and I did scream a lot and that broke my voice for a few hours.

✓ Pretty young because I spent a lot of time with my friends during Total War and I screamed a lot and that broke my voice for a few hours.

The verb 'shattered' is incorrect in this context; the correct past tense verb is 'spent' to indicate time usage. Also, 'did scream' is unnecessary; simple past 'screamed' is appropriate here.

× And I cannot say anything other than doing other than like, waving my friend to tell that I cannot tell you anything.

✓ And I cannot say anything other than waving to my friend to tell them that I cannot say anything.

The phrase 'doing other than like' is incorrect and confusing. The correct conjunction and phrase should be 'other than waving'. Also, 'waving my friend' should be 'waving to my friend' to indicate the action properly.

× waving my friend to tell that I cannot tell you anything.

✓ waving to my friend to tell them that I cannot tell you anything.

The verb 'wave' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating the person being waved at. Also, 'tell that' is incomplete; it should be 'tell them that' to specify the indirect object.

× waving my friend to tell that I cannot tell you anything.

✓ waving to my friend to tell them that I cannot tell you anything.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here because the speaker refers to their friend, so 'them' is the correct pronoun to use as the indirect object.

× Same question for me. Singing is not magic.

✓ The same question applies to me. Singing is not magic.

The phrase 'Same question for me' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'The' and 'applies to me' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× But he's always listen to the Chinese music.

✓ But he always listens to Chinese music.

The verb 'listen' must agree with the third person singular subject 'he', so it should be 'listens'. Also, 'the Chinese music' is better as 'Chinese music' without 'the'.

× But he's always listen to the Chinese music.

✓ But he always listens to Chinese music.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'Chinese music' when speaking generally about the genre.

× That's why you're so bad at English.

✓ That's why he's so bad at English.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect because the speaker is referring to a third person 'he', so 'he' should be used.

× Turn on their favorite music songs and they can sings things with the subtitles and karaoke.

✓ Turn on their favorite songs and they can sing along with the subtitles and karaoke.

The phrase 'music songs' is redundant; 'songs' suffices. Also, 'sings' should be 'sing' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. 'Sing along' is a more natural phrase here.

× Turn on their favorite music songs and they can sings things with the subtitles and karaoke.

✓ Turn on their favorite songs and they can sing along with the subtitles and karaoke.

The preposition 'with' is appropriate here to indicate accompaniment, but 'sing things with the subtitles' is awkward; 'sing along with the subtitles' is clearer.

× The depth of the wait, the dip of the lyric.

✓ The depth of the beat, the dip of the lyric.

The word 'wait' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'beat' which relates to music. 'Dip' may be a mishearing or misuse; context is unclear but left as is.