唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answers clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like "it's AI have a positive energy" and "we have pouring." Instead, explain your ideas simply and directly, for example, say singing makes you feel happy and helps you share emotions with others. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it gives me positive energy. When I feel sad or stressed, singing helps me feel better. Also, I enjoy sharing songs with my friends because music connects people.

建議: Focus on answering the question directly and clearly. Use correct verb tenses and avoid confusing phrases like "every cars." You can mention that you have not taken formal lessons but have watched videos online to learn. Keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I watch videos on YouTube to learn how to sing better.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct vocabulary. Instead of "my voice is not declared," say "I don't think my voice is good enough." Also, explain your feelings about singing for others and where you prefer to sing. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I don't want to sing for many people because I don't think my voice is very good. However, I like to sing at home with my friends where I feel comfortable.

建議: Make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and vocabulary. Instead of confusing phrases, say that singing and listening to music can help people improve their mood and feel happier. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When someone is in a bad mood, singing or listening to music can help them feel better and forget their sadness.

× Yes, I like singing because it's AI have a positive energy.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it has a positive energy.

The pronoun 'AI' is incorrect here; it should be 'it' referring to singing. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× We can do it when we are sad or we have pouring.

✓ We can do it when we are sad or feeling down.

The phrase 'we have pouring' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'feeling down' or 'feeling sad'. 'Pouring' is not used to describe emotions here.

× We can share a thing to other music with other people.

✓ We can share something about music with other people.

The phrase 'share a thing to other music' is incorrect. 'Share something about music' is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'to other music' is incorrect preposition usage.

× No, I never learn how I sing but I see on YouTube every cars how to be a popular singer so yeah.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing but I watch on YouTube every day how to be a popular singer, so yeah.

The verb 'learn' should be in past participle 'learned' with 'have' for present perfect tense. 'See' should be 'watch' for videos. 'Every cars' is incorrect; likely meant 'every day'. Also, 'how I sing' should be 'how to sing'.

× No, I don't want because I think my voice is not declared that to be I think.

✓ No, I don't want to because I think my voice is not good enough, I think.

The phrase 'my voice is not declared that to be' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'my voice is not good enough' or similar. Also, 'don't want' needs an object or infinitive 'to'.

× But I will sing it myself in my house with my friend only.

✓ But I will sing by myself at my house with only my friend.

'Sing it myself' is incorrect; 'sing by myself' is better. 'In my house' is better as 'at my house'. 'With my friend only' should be 'with only my friend' for clarity.

× Yeah, I believe that because other people don't have the bad mood, he can go out of the mood with sing and listen to a lot of music.

✓ Yeah, I believe that because when people are in a bad mood, they can get out of it by singing and listening to a lot of music.

The sentence has pronoun inconsistency: 'other people' is plural but 'he' is singular. Also, 'go out of the mood with sing' is incorrect; it should be 'get out of it by singing'.

× Can this, all this can be take us from the sad to happy?

✓ Can this, all of this, take us from sadness to happiness?

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Can this, all this can be take us' is ungrammatical. It should be 'Can this, all of this, take us from sadness to happiness?' Also, 'sad' and 'happy' should be nouns here: 'sadness' and 'happiness'.