唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but it has some redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and avoid repeating words like 'new new song'. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy. I believe I have a good voice, and I especially like learning new songs that brighten my mood.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, try to add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have improved my skills by watching others sing and practicing on my own.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using better linking words. Also, use correct tense and natural expressions.

範例: I want to sing for my mother. Although I have always wanted to, I never had the chance before. However, I plan to sing for her on her upcoming birthday.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'I love smoking'. Make sure to use correct words and sentence structures. Also, try to explain your opinion clearly with linking words.

範例: Personally, I believe singing brings happiness to people because when I sing, it lifts my spirits. I enjoy singing as a way to feel joyful and share that happiness with others.

× Yes, I'm into singing. Singing makes me feel happy and I think my voice is good for singing and I love singing new new song and which makes me very happy.

✓ Yes, I'm into singing. Singing makes me feel happy and I think my voice is good for singing and I love singing new songs which make me very happy.

The phrase 'new new song' is incorrect; it should be 'new songs' to indicate plural. Also, 'which makes me very happy' should be 'which make me very happy' because the relative pronoun 'which' refers to the plural noun 'songs'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× No, I've never learned how to sing but I turned from watching others singing and it helped me to improve my singing skills too.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing but I learned from watching others sing and it helped me to improve my singing skills too.

The phrase 'I turned from watching others singing' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'I learned from watching others sing'. 'Turned' is the wrong verb here, and 'singing' should be the base form 'sing' after 'watch'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5) and verb + -ing form issue (ID 8).

× In coming days, I would sing for her in her birthday.

✓ In the coming days, I will sing for her on her birthday.

The phrase 'I would sing' is incorrect for expressing a future intention; 'I will sing' is correct. Also, 'in coming days' should be 'in the coming days' and 'in her birthday' should be 'on her birthday'. This is a future tense issue (ID 7) and incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× In coming days, I would sing for her in her birthday.

✓ In the coming days, I will sing for her on her birthday.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect before 'her birthday'; the correct preposition is 'on' because we use 'on' for specific days and dates. Also, 'in coming days' should be 'in the coming days'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue (ID 11).

× Personally I do think that singing makes and bring people happiness cause when I sing I think I bring that kind of happiness in my life and I love smoking to bring happiness in my life.

✓ Personally, I do think that singing makes and brings people happiness because when I sing I think I bring that kind of happiness into my life and I love singing to bring happiness into my life.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'singing' (third person singular issue, ID 2). The word 'cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness (incorrect conjunction use, ID 16). 'Smoking' is incorrect in context; it should be 'singing'. Also, 'in my life' should be 'into my life' to indicate movement towards. These are incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12), incorrect conjunction use (ID 16), and incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).