唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is quite natural and you provide reasons, but some sentences are grammatically incorrect and a bit repetitive. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I don't like singing because I don't have a good voice. Instead, I prefer dancing, which I enjoy much more. When I sing in front of others, I feel awkward, so I usually only sing when I'm alone, like in the washroom.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. Avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

範例: I have never had formal singing lessons because my family couldn't afford them when I was a child. However, I have watched some singing programs to learn, but I still don't sing well because I lack a good voice.

建議: Your answer shows good intention but is a bit confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts logically.

範例: I would like to sing for my mom and sister. Even though I don't have a good voice, I try to be enthusiastic when I sing for them. It usually makes them smile because they find it funny when I sing awkwardly.

建議: Your answer attempts to explain the effect of singing but is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples, using correct grammar and vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Music can evoke memories and emotions, and it releases hormones that make us feel good when we listen or sing.

× Is a little bit awkward when I sung, so I just stopped singing when there's other people around.

✓ It is a little bit awkward when I sing, so I just stop singing when there are other people around.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'sung' (past participle) instead of the simple present tense 'sing' to describe a habitual action. Also, 'Is' should be 'It is' to form a complete sentence, and 'there's other people' should be 'there are other people' to agree in number with the plural noun 'people'.

× I just stopped singing when there's other people around.

✓ I just stop singing when there are other people around.

The sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'stop' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'stopped'. Also, 'there's' should be 'there are' to agree with the plural noun 'people'.

× But I watch a program that will learn how to sing but overall I cannot sing well.

✓ But I watch a program that teaches how to sing, but overall I cannot sing well.

The phrase 'will learn' is incorrect here; the program teaches, so the present tense 'teaches' is appropriate. Also, the sentence needs a comma before 'but' to separate clauses.

× I still and I don't have a nice voice.

✓ I still don't have a nice voice.

The phrase 'I still and I don't have a nice voice' is ungrammatical and redundant. The correct form is 'I still don't have a nice voice' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I think if I become optimistic and enthusiastic whenever I sing for them, even though I though I am not blessed with a nice voice, it's just giving them a little smile when I sing because it's awkward when I'm singing.

✓ I think if I become optimistic and enthusiastic whenever I sing for them, even though I am not blessed with a nice voice, it just gives them a little smile because it's awkward when I'm singing.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect conjunctions ('though I though'). Also, 'it's just giving them' should be 'it just gives them' to maintain subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

× It's a funny for them.

✓ It's funny for them.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'funny', which is an adjective. The correct form is 'It's funny for them'.

× Seeing could be a delight, memories and feeling to those who could hear and did it 'cause it really is some specific hormone in our body that if we hear some music, we feel something in it.

✓ Seeing could bring delight, memories, and feelings to those who hear it because there is a specific hormone in our body that makes us feel something when we hear music.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness, including proper verb forms and conjunctions.