唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'only' and 'everyone', you can say 'I prefer singing alone or with my family and close friends because I feel shy performing in front of others.'

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel better and reduces stress. However, I usually prefer singing alone or with my family and close friends since I feel shy performing in front of others.

建議: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, say 'I learned to sing when I was a child because I wanted to improve my skills, so my family supported me by enrolling me in a singing class.'

範例: Yes, I learned to sing when I was a child because I wanted to improve my skills. Therefore, my family supported me by enrolling me in a singing class.

建議: Make your answer more natural and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, say 'I prefer singing for my family and close friends because I feel shy performing in front of a large audience.'

範例: I prefer singing for my family and close friends because I feel shy performing in front of a large audience.

建議: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, say 'Of course, singing can bring happiness. When people feel stressed, they often listen to music and sing along to relax. For example, I also enjoy singing to feel better.'

範例: Of course, singing can bring happiness. When people feel stressed, they often listen to music and sing along to relax. For example, I also enjoy singing to feel better.

× Yes I like singing, it's made me feel better and less stressed.

✓ Yes I like singing, it has made me feel better and less stressed.

The phrase 'it's made' is a contraction of 'it is made', which is incorrect here. The correct form is 'it has made' using the present perfect tense to indicate an action that has an effect on the present.

× But when I sing in front of everyone I always feel shy so I prefer singing to myself only or singing to my family or my close friend only.

✓ But when I sing in front of everyone I always feel shy so I prefer singing to myself only or singing to my family or my close friends only.

The phrase 'my close friend only' should be plural 'my close friends only' because it refers to more than one person, matching the plural 'family'.

× Yes, I have learned singing when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I learned singing when I was a child.

The use of present perfect 'have learned' is incorrect with the specific past time 'when I was a child'. Simple past 'learned' should be used for actions completed in the past at a definite time.

× So my family support me by sending me to learn in a singing class.

✓ So my family supports me by sending me to learn in a singing class.

The subject 'family' is singular when considered as a unit, so the verb should be 'supports' to agree in number.

× Well I would like to sing for my family or close friends because I always shy when I singing in front of everyone so I prefer singing to my family or my close friends only.

✓ Well I would like to sing for my family or close friends because I always feel shy when I sing in front of everyone so I prefer singing to my family or my close friends only.

The phrase 'I always shy' is missing the verb 'feel' to express the state. Also, 'when I singing' should be 'when I sing' because 'when' is followed by the base form of the verb.

× Of course seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Of course singing can bring happiness to people.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'singing' to match the context of the conversation.

× Like when people feel stress they will people always listen to music and sing along with the music to make them feel more relaxed.

✓ Like when people feel stressed, they always listen to music and sing along to make themselves feel more relaxed.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('will people always'). Also, 'feel stress' should be 'feel stressed' to use the adjective form. 'Sing along with the music' is better as 'sing along'. 'Make them feel' should be 'make themselves feel' for clarity and correctness.

× For example like me, I'm also listen to music and sing to.

✓ For example, like me, I also listen to music and sing too.

The phrase 'I'm also listen' is incorrect; it should be 'I also listen' to match subject-verb agreement in present tense. 'Sing to' is incomplete; 'sing too' is the correct expression.