唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇来描述自己的感受。

範例: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice sounds unpleasant and it doesn't suit me.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，建议使用正确的时态和介词，并避免重复表达。

範例: No, I have never learned to sing because I am not interested and I think I don't sing well.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子，明确表达意愿，并补充具体原因。

範例: If I have a chance, I would like to sing for my grandmother because she is kind and always encourages me.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，建议使用连贯的句子表达观点，并用具体例子支持观点。

範例: I believe singing can make people happy, especially those who enjoy it. However, I feel embarrassed when I sing because I am not good at it and worry about others hearing me.

× Actually I do not like singing because I my voice is like the sound sound of dark and I do not think seeing this very suit for me.

✓ Actually I do not like singing because my voice is like the sound of dark and I do not think singing suits me very well.

句中'sound sound'重复，且'dark'用法不当，应为'dark sound'。'seeing'应为'singing'，且'suit'应与主语singing保持一致，改为'suits'。这是单复数和词形搭配错误。

× Actually I do not like singing because I my voice is like the sound sound of dark and I do not think seeing this very suit for me.

✓ Actually I do not like singing because my voice is like the sound of dark and I do not think singing suits me very well.

短语'suit for me'中'suit'后不需要介词'for'，应直接用'suit me'。这是介词使用错误。

× Uh, actually I didn't learn because I'm not interested with it, so I didn't learn it and I think I sound bad, so I really didn't want others to, umm, learn.

✓ Uh, actually I didn't learn because I'm not interested in it, so I didn't learn it and I think I sound bad, so I really didn't want others to, umm, learn.

短语'interested with'应为'interested in'，这是介词使用错误。

× Uh, actually I didn't learn because I'm not interested with it, so I didn't learn it and I think I sound bad, so I really didn't want others to, umm, learn.

✓ Uh, actually I didn't learn because I'm not interested in it, so I didn't learn it and I think I sound bad, so I really didn't want others to, umm, learn.

'interested'后应接介词'in'，而非'with'，这是介词使用错误。

× I want to if, if I can, I have a chance to sing. I want to sing for my grandmother because she's as well and she always encouraged me to sing.

✓ I want to, if I have a chance, sing. I want to sing for my grandmother because she's unwell and she always encouraged me to sing.

句中'she's as well'应为'she's unwell'，且句子结构不清晰，需调整。'if, if I can, I have a chance to sing'表达不自然，应简化为'if I have a chance to sing'。这是代词和句子结构错误。

× I want to if, if I can, I have a chance to sing. I want to sing for my grandmother because she's as well and she always encouraged me to sing.

✓ I want to, if I have a chance, sing. I want to sing for my grandmother because she's unwell and she always encouraged me to sing.

'as well'用法错误，应为形容词'unwell'表示身体不适。

× For some people who really like singing, I think it it will bring them happiness. But As for me, I think seeing just gives me some a feel of embarrassing because I didn't sing well and I'm afraid that other people learn learn my singing.

✓ For some people who really like singing, I think it will bring them happiness. But as for me, I think singing just gives me a feeling of embarrassment because I don't sing well and I'm afraid that other people will hear my singing.

'seeing'应为'singing'，'some a feel of embarrassing'表达错误，应为'a feeling of embarrassment'。'didn't sing well'时态与上下文不符，应为一般现在时'don't sing well'。'learn learn'重复且用词错误，应为'hear'。这是单复数、词形和时态错误。

× For some people who really like singing, I think it it will bring them happiness. But As for me, I think seeing just gives me some a feel of embarrassing because I didn't sing well and I'm afraid that other people learn learn my singing.

✓ For some people who really like singing, I think it will bring them happiness. But as for me, I think singing just gives me a feeling of embarrassment because I don't sing well and I'm afraid that other people will hear my singing.

表达个人习惯或事实时应使用一般现在时，'didn't sing well'应改为'don't sing well'。

× For some people who really like singing, I think it it will bring them happiness. But As for me, I think seeing just gives me some a feel of embarrassing because I didn't sing well and I'm afraid that other people learn learn my singing.

✓ For some people who really like singing, I think it will bring them happiness. But as for me, I think singing just gives me a feeling of embarrassment because I don't sing well and I'm afraid that other people will hear my singing.

表达将来可能发生的事情时，应使用将来时态，'other people learn learn my singing'应改为'other people will hear my singing'。