唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding unclear phrases. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, explain your feelings about singing and give a clear reason without unrelated comments.

範例: I don't usually like singing because I don't feel confident about my singing abilities. However, I enjoy singing with my friends during karaoke nights because it's fun and helps me relax.

建議: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, explain your preference and future plans more specifically.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I believe I don't have much talent for it. Instead, I prefer learning to play a musical instrument. However, I think singing is a valuable skill, so I plan to start lessons soon.

建議: Your answer is quite good but can be improved by using smoother linking words and clearer phrasing. Also, avoid redundancy and make your sentences more concise and natural.

範例: I would like to sing for an audience or my close friends because their support and appreciation make the experience special and motivate me to perform better.

建議: Try to use more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid awkward phrases like "reveal your stress"; instead, use expressions like "relieve stress." Make your examples relevant and smoothly connected.

範例: Yes, definitely. Singing can help people relieve stress and enjoy new experiences. For example, many people like to sing in the shower or while driving because it makes them feel happier.

× Not actually 'cause that I'm not really feel good with my singing abilities, but also I should say that I love singing with my friends at karaoke nights.

✓ Not actually, because I don't really feel good about my singing abilities, but I should also say that I love singing with my friends at karaoke nights.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word usage. 'Cause that' is informal and incorrect here; 'feel good with' should be 'feel good about'. Also, 'but also I should say' is awkward; 'but I should also say' is better. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I really enjoy good actor.

✓ I really enjoy being a good actor.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'I really enjoy good actor' lacks a verb and proper structure. Adding 'being' clarifies the meaning, making it a correct expression of enjoyment.

× Definitely no, because I don't have any talent in singing and I'm really prefer to know how to play play an instrument rather than singing.

✓ Definitely not, because I don't have any talent in singing and I really prefer to know how to play an instrument rather than sing.

'Definitely no' is incorrect; 'Definitely not' is the proper negative response. 'I'm really prefer' is incorrect; 'I really prefer' is correct. Also, 'play play' is a repetition error. 'Rather than singing' should be 'rather than sing' to maintain parallel structure.

× But I think singing is a great experience too and I should learn it as soon as possible.

✓ But I think singing is a great experience too, and I should learn it as soon as possible.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate two independent clauses. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× I would like to sing for an audience or maybe my close friends 'cause that singing for others feels special because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

✓ I would like to sing for an audience or maybe my close friends because singing for others feels special since they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

'Cause that' is informal and incorrect; 'because' or 'since' is appropriate. The sentence is corrected for clarity and formality.

× Yes, definitely, because I think that with singing you can reveal your stress and gain new experiences.

✓ Yes, definitely, because I think that through singing you can relieve your stress and gain new experiences.

'Reveal your stress' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'relieve your stress'. Also, 'with singing' is better expressed as 'through singing' to indicate the means.

× For an interesting fact, lots of people try singing when they have a shower or they when they are in car.

✓ As an interesting fact, lots of people try singing when they have a shower or when they are in the car.

The phrase 'For an interesting fact' is awkward; 'As an interesting fact' is better. 'Try singing' is acceptable but could be 'sing'. 'They when they are in car' is incorrect; it should be 'when they are in the car'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.