唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构不完整，且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，避免口语缩写，且注意时态一致。可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel better when I am feeling down. Also, as an introverted person, singing is a good way for me to express my emotions.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和断句问题，且表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意单复数形式，并用连接词使句子更自然。

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing from my mother. She loves singing just like me. Since we are both introverted, we often use singing to express our love for each other.

建議: 回答未完成且语法错误较多。建议完整表达想法，避免句子中断，使用连接词使内容连贯，并注意时态和主谓一致。

範例: The first person I want to sing for is my grandmother because she passed away a few years ago. I really miss her and want to show how much our family loves and needs her. She was such a powerful woman.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子，增加连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when we sing "Happy Birthday" to our friends or family, it expresses joy and hope that their wishes will come true, which brings happiness.

× Yes, I do 'cause singing helps me when I was feeling down and also as an introverted person, singing is a good way to express our emotions and.

✓ Yes, I do because singing helps me when I feel down and also, as an introverted person, singing is a good way to express my emotions.

这里的时间是一般现在时，描述的是习惯性动作或事实，所以“was feeling”应改为“feel”。另外，主语从“our emotions”改为“my emotions”，因为说话者指的是自己。

× My mother loves singing just like me. We are both introverted person as I said so we normally use singing to. Express the love between us.

✓ My mother loves singing just like me. We are both introverted persons as I said, so we normally use singing to express the love between us.

“person”应使用复数形式“persons”，因为主语是“we”，表示两个人。

× We are both introverted person as I said so we normally use singing to. Express the love between us.

✓ We are both introverted persons as I said, so we normally use singing to express the love between us.

句子中“to.”和“Express”分开，导致句子结构不完整，应合并为一个完整句子。

× I really want to show how much our family love her and needs her.

✓ I really want to show how much our family loves her and needs her.

“family”作为单数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式“loves”和“needs”。

× She's such a powerful woman but.

✓ She's such a powerful woman.

句子以“but”结尾，缺少后续内容，导致句子不完整，应去掉“but”。

× Every time we'll sing it to our friends or our family it shows some kind of laughing, hoping they got what they want and their wish come true, which is some kind of happiness I guess.

✓ Every time we sing it to our friends or our family, it shows some kind of laughter, hoping they get what they want and their wishes come true, which is some kind of happiness, I guess.

“we'll sing”应为一般现在时“we sing”，表示习惯动作；“laughing”应改为名词“laughter”；“got”应为现在时“get”；“wish”应为复数“wishes”，与“come”保持一致。