唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Yes, I love singing because umm, when I was singing I can forget lots of things that bother me or make me angry, which helps me relieve stress. For example, after a long day for work, at work and studying, sing my favorite songs really cheers me up.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
Yes, I have. When I was 11 years old, my school music teacher taught me some basic music knowledge and for example, the how to use my voice. Yeah, this improve my voice skills and made me feel more confident when I was singing. I think it's meaningful.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
You want to sing for? Actually, I want to sing for my closest friends. Last week she went to she went aboard to the Australia. Yeah, the distance so long and we always sing together before she went aboard. I miss her so much, so I won't sing.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, I do. I think singing songs will make people feel relaxed. And you know, songs can relieve people's physical stress, make them forget those bad things which make them angry.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 70.0建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免使用口语填充词如“umm”，并注意时态一致。
範例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me forget my worries and relieve stress. For example, after a long day of work and study, singing my favorite songs cheers me up.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的时态和句子结构，避免口语化词汇，且连接词使用更自然。
範例: Yes, I have. When I was 11, my music teacher taught me basic singing techniques, such as how to use my voice properly. This improved my skills and made me more confident when singing.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯，且信息不完整。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和连接词，使表达更流畅自然。
範例: I want to sing for my closest friend. She went to Australia last week, and we used to sing together before she left. I miss her a lot, so singing reminds me of her.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答内容较简单，表达有些重复。建议丰富细节，使用更丰富的词汇和连接词，使回答更自然和有说服力。
範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and reduce stress. For example, singing can distract us from negative emotions and improve our mood.
文法
× when I was singing I can forget lots of things that bother me or make me angry
✓ when I was singing I could forget lots of things that bothered me or made me angry
这里时态不一致，主句是过去时，情态动词也应使用过去式could，且从句中的动词也应使用过去式bothered和made。
× after a long day for work, at work and studying
✓ after a long day of work, at work and studying
介词应使用of来表示“工作的一天”，而不是for。
× sing my favorite songs really cheers me up
✓ singing my favorite songs really cheers me up
动词作主语时应使用动名词形式singing，而不是动词原形sing。
× the how to use my voice
✓ how to use my voice
冠词the不应与how连用，应直接使用how to引导。
× this improve my voice skills and made me feel more confident
✓ this improved my voice skills and made me feel more confident
主语this是单数，动词应使用过去式improved，与后半句时态保持一致。
× You want to sing for?
✓ Who do you want to sing for?
句子缺少疑问词who，导致句子结构不完整。
× Last week she went to she went aboard to the Australia
✓ Last week she went abroad to Australia
abroad是副词，不需要前置词to，且Australia前不加冠词the。
× she went aboard to the Australia
✓ she went abroad to Australia
abroad是副词，不能与to连用，且Australia前不加冠词the。
× I miss her so much, so I won't sing
✓ I miss her so much, so I won't sing now
句子缺少时间状语now，使意思更完整。
× songs can relieve people's physical stress, make them forget those bad things which make them angry
✓ songs can relieve people's physical stress and make them forget those bad things which make them angry
两个并列谓语动词之间应使用连词and连接。
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