唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it starts with repeating the examiner's question, which is unnecessary. Also, the explanation is somewhat formal and could be more natural and personal. Try to make your response more conversational and concise, avoiding redundancy.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lifts my mood when I'm feeling stressed. Singing makes me feel happy and calm, so I often sing when I want to unwind.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Also, the sentences are somewhat fragmented. Try to use complete sentences with proper linking words to improve coherence and fluency.

範例: I haven't taken any professional singing lessons, but I often watch tutorials on YouTube and other social media platforms to learn. Additionally, I like to sing along with my favorite songs to practice and improve my skills.

建議: Your answer is heartfelt but contains run-on sentences and some incomplete thoughts. To improve, try to organize your ideas into clear sentences, use linking words, and complete your thoughts fully to make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: I love singing for my daughter, who is just four months old. Whenever she feels sleepy, I sing soothing lullabies to help calm her down. Singing has become a special bonding moment for us, and it brings me a lot of joy.

建議: Your answer is relevant and includes some supporting details, but it sounds a bit formal and repetitive. Try to use more natural language and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, adding a personal opinion or example could make your answer more engaging.

範例: Yes, I think singing can make many people happy. It not only boosts confidence but also helps people express their feelings. For example, when I sing, I feel more positive and connected to others.

× I have not attended a professional institution on how to learn sing, but I usually watch YouTube TV or social media platform to learn how to sing.

✓ I have not attended a professional institution on how to learn singing, but I usually watch YouTube TV or social media platforms to learn how to sing.

The phrase 'learn sing' is incorrect because after 'learn to' the base verb is used, but after 'how to' the gerund form 'singing' is more appropriate here to indicate the activity. Also, 'social media platform' should be plural 'platforms' to match the general meaning of multiple platforms.

× While listening to the music.

✓ While listening to the music, I also sing along with it and try to practice singing.

'While listening to the music.' is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb and subject. It should be connected to the following sentence to form a complete sentence.

× I love to sing for my daughter she's only four months old whenever she feels sleepy, I see her a soothing lullaby to help calm her down singing has become a special bonding moment for me and my daughter, and it brings me a lot of joy to know that my.

✓ I love to sing for my daughter; she's only four months old. Whenever she feels sleepy, I sing her a soothing lullaby to help calm her down. Singing has become a special bonding moment for me and my daughter, and it brings me a lot of joy to know that.

The original sentence is a run-on with missing punctuation and unclear pronoun references. 'I see her a soothing lullaby' is incorrect; it should be 'I sing her a soothing lullaby.' Also, the sentence ends abruptly and needs proper punctuation and structure to clarify meaning.