唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is honest and relevant, but it can be more natural and effective by avoiding repeated phrases and adding a linking word to connect ideas. Also, try to use simpler expressions instead of idioms that may not fit well here. For example, instead of 'not a piece of cake', you could say 'not easy'.

範例: I don't find singing easy because I am not very good at it. However, I enjoy singing when I am alone at home because it helps me relax.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'unfortunately' if you want to sound more neutral. Try to explain why you feel guilty to add more content.

範例: I have never taken singing lessons or joined a singing academy, and now I regret not learning earlier because I think it would have helped me improve.

建議: Your answer is good but can be more natural by using consistent verb tenses and clearer linking words. Instead of 'give them a tribute', you can say 'pay tribute to them'.

範例: If I had the chance, I would sing for my parents to show my appreciation and pay tribute to them.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs more natural phrasing and better linking words. For example, use 'energetic and happy' as 'feel energetic and happy'. Also, 'after doing singing' can be 'after singing'. Try to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can make people feel energetic and happy. Moreover, it uplifts their mood and helps them concentrate better on their work after spending some time singing.

× Unfortunately, I've never tried to learn singing and never joined a singing Academy, but now I feel guilty for my mistake.

✓ Unfortunately, I've never tried to learn to sing and have never joined a singing academy, but now I feel guilty for my mistake.

The verb 'try' is usually followed by 'to' + base verb, so 'try to learn' is correct instead of 'try to learn singing'. Also, 'learn' is followed by the base verb 'to sing' rather than the gerund 'singing'. Additionally, 'never joined' should be in present perfect 'have never joined' to match 'I've never tried'. 'Academy' should not be capitalized unless it is part of a proper noun.

× If I were given a chance, I'll probably sing for my parents and through singing I'll give them a tribute.

✓ If I were given a chance, I would probably sing for my parents and through singing I would give them a tribute.

In conditional sentences with 'If I were', the main clause should use 'would' instead of 'will' to express hypothetical situations. Therefore, 'I'll' should be corrected to 'I would'.

× Yes, of course people live energetic and happy after doing singing. It can help to uplift their moods and it also helps them to focus on their works after they spend some time on singing.

✓ Yes, of course people feel energetic and happy after singing. It can help uplift their moods and also helps them focus on their work after they spend some time singing.

The adjective 'energetic' describes a feeling, so 'people live energetic' is incorrect; it should be 'people feel energetic'. The phrase 'after doing singing' is unnatural; 'after singing' is better. 'Help to uplift' can be simplified to 'help uplift'. 'Works' should be singular 'work' when referring to tasks in general. Also, 'spend some time on singing' is better as 'spend some time singing' without 'on'.