唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'celebrate' 대신 'happy'나 'joyful' 같은 감정을 표현하는 단어를 사용하고, 'when I singing'은 'when I sing'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 'my singing skill is very well'은 'my singing skills are quite good'로 고쳐야 합니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy. Actually, I think my singing skills are quite good.

建議: 답변이 모순되고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 'No, I haven't'와 'I ever learned'가 충돌하며, 'ever'의 사용도 부적절합니다. 명확하게 과거 경험을 표현하고, 이유를 덧붙일 때는 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 만들어야 합니다.

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I want to learn because I enjoy music.

建議: 문법 오류와 어휘 선택이 부적절합니다. 'they reaction'은 'their reactions'로 수정하고, 'I feel like sell up'은 의미가 불분명하므로 'I feel encouraged'나 'I feel supported'로 바꾸는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 이유를 명확히 설명하는 문장을 구성해야 합니다.

範例: I want to sing for my friends because their reactions are very positive, and it makes me feel encouraged.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 'seeing'은 'singing'으로 수정해야 하며, 문장을 간결하고 논리적으로 구성해야 합니다. 예를 들어, 노래가 사람들에게 행복을 줄 수 있는 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: I think singing can bring happiness to people because it has the power to lift their spirits and create joy.

× Yes, I like singing because I feel celebrate when I singing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I feel happy when I sing.

The verb 'celebrate' is incorrectly used as an adjective here; it should be replaced with 'happy' to express feeling. Also, 'I singing' is incorrect; after 'I', the base form 'sing' should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× Actually my singing skill is very well.

✓ Actually, my singing skill is very good.

The word 'well' is an adverb and cannot be used to describe a noun like 'skill'. The correct adjective is 'good'. Also, a comma after 'Actually' improves sentence clarity.

× No, I haven't. I ever learned how to sing because I want to learn to sing.

✓ No, I haven't. I have never learned how to sing because I want to learn to sing.

The word 'ever' is incorrectly used in a positive sentence; 'never' should be used in negative sentences. Also, 'learned' should be in present perfect tense 'have learned' to match 'haven't' and the context.

× I want to sing for my friends because they reaction is very good and I feel like sell up.

✓ I want to sing for my friends because their reaction is very good and I feel like giving up.

The possessive pronoun 'their' should be used instead of 'they' to modify 'reaction'. The phrase 'feel like sell up' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'feel like giving up'.

× As I think seeing can bring happiness to people because it have a power that. Happiness to people.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because it has that power.

'Seeing' is a typo and should be 'singing'. The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence structure is awkward; rephrasing improves clarity.