唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat natural but incomplete and contains minor grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'and it's makes me feel better and I also wish to have a better sound. But I.', you could say 'because it makes me feel better, and I also wish I could sing with a better voice.'

範例: I'm not a professional singer, but I enjoy singing when I'm feeling sad because it makes me feel better. For instance, I often sing my favorite song, 'Puerto Rico Man,' which cheers me up. However, I wish I could improve my singing voice to sound better.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'educated for being a singer.' Instead, say 'taken singing lessons.' Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I never wanted to become a professional singer. Therefore, I have never attended any singing classes.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'ask me ask me' and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, keep sentences concise and clear.

範例: I like to sing for myself, and sometimes I sing for my boyfriend when he asks me to help him fall asleep. For example, I often sing my favorite song to him, which helps him sleep peacefully.

建議: Your answer conveys your opinion well but could be improved by using varied vocabulary and more natural expressions. Avoid repeating similar words like 'more relaxed and more happy.' Also, clarify the last sentence for better understanding.

範例: Definitely, I believe singing helps people feel happier and more relaxed. It allows them to enjoy their time and brighten their day. Moreover, singers can inspire and support us through their music in life.

× I sing my favorite song, Puerto Rico Man, and it's makes me feel better and I also wish to have a better sound.

✓ I sing my favorite song, Puerto Rico Man, and it makes me feel better and I also wish to have a better sound.

The verb 'makes' should be used with the third person singular subject 'it'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it's makes' which is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'it makes'.

× Unfortunately, I have never been educated for being a singer and I didn't like to be a singer, so I never have been in a singing class.

✓ Unfortunately, I have never been educated to be a singer and I didn't like to be a singer, so I have never been in a singing class.

The phrase 'educated for being a singer' is incorrect; the correct form is 'educated to be a singer'. Also, 'never have been' should be 'have never been' to follow standard word order in present perfect tense. The past tense 'didn't like' is correct here because it refers to a past preference.

× I want to sing for myself and sometimes for my boyfriend when he wants to sleep and ask me ask me for singing and I sing my favorite song for him and after that he can sleep very well.

✓ I want to sing for myself and sometimes for my boyfriend when he wants to sleep and asks me to sing, and I sing my favorite song for him and after that he can sleep very well.

The verb 'ask' should be in third person singular form 'asks' to agree with 'he'. Also, 'ask me ask me for singing' is repetitive and incorrect; the correct expression is 'asks me to sing'. This corrects pronoun and verb usage errors.

× I think singing makes people feel better and more relaxed and more happy and they can enjoy their time and their day when they're singing.

✓ I think singing makes people feel better, more relaxed, and happier, and they can enjoy their time and their day when they're singing.

The comparative form 'more happy' is incorrect; the correct comparative adjective is 'happier'. Also, commas are added for clarity in the list of adjectives.