唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I', say 'I usually sing alone in my bedroom and use musical apps, which I enjoy a lot.'

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing. Whenever I am free, I prefer to sing alone in my bedroom. Moreover, I often use musical apps to enhance my experience, which I find very enjoyable.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, using simple sentences and linking words. For example, explain that you have not formally learnt singing but had some exposure to Indian classical music called Sangeet during school.

範例: No, I have not formally learnt how to sing. However, during my school days, I studied a subject called Sangeet, which is a form of Indian classical music. This gave me some basic knowledge about singing.

建議: Make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. For example, say 'I would like to sing for my family and friends, especially my mother, who is a big fan of singing.'

範例: I would like to sing for my family and friends. Especially, I want to sing for my mother because she is a big fan of singing and supports me a lot.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. For example, say 'Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people relieve stress and anxiety in difficult times.'

範例: Yes, of course. Singing can bring happiness to individuals because nowadays many people face stress and anxiety. Music can help heal these feelings, so it is very important for their well-being.

× Whenever I'm free from my schedule, I always prefer to singing alone.

✓ Whenever I'm free from my schedule, I always prefer to sing alone.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. So, 'prefer to sing' is correct instead of 'prefer to singing'.

× Moreover, I I am sitting in the in my bedroom and prefer to download some musical apps, so I enjoyed a lot.

✓ Moreover, I am sitting in my bedroom and prefer to download some musical apps, so I enjoy it a lot.

The sentence has repetition ('I I') and incorrect article usage ('in the in my bedroom'). Also, 'enjoyed' is past tense but the context suggests present tense, so 'enjoy' is appropriate.

× But I hardly remember that in my school period there are there were one musical subject that name is Sangeet is a particular Indian classical music period.

✓ But I hardly remember that in my school period there was one musical subject named Sangeet, which is a particular Indian classical music genre.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'there are there were' and 'one musical subject' which requires singular verb 'was'. Also, 'name is' should be 'named' and 'period' is incorrectly used instead of 'genre' or 'type'.

× My she is die hard friend of singing so that's why I'll singing for my mother and I prefer to.

✓ She is a die-hard fan of singing, so that's why I will sing for my mother and I prefer to.

The pronoun 'My she' is incorrect; it should be 'She'. 'Die hard friend of singing' is incorrect; 'die-hard fan of singing' is correct. 'I'll singing' is incorrect; it should be 'I will sing'.

× because there are nowadays there are many situations happens that many people faces anxiety, anxieties or stress.

✓ because nowadays there are many situations where many people face anxiety or stress.

The phrase 'there are nowadays there are' is redundant. 'Situations happens' is incorrect; 'situations happen' is correct. 'People faces' should be 'people face' due to subject-verb agreement.