唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lộn xộn và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh sử dụng các cụm từ mâu thuẫn như "I love singing instead of I'm not really good at it". Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về cảm giác khi hát và lý do bạn thích hát.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and boosts my confidence.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I'm not talent". Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về quá trình học hát của bạn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I used to take singing lessons because I thought I had some talent, but I stopped because I realized I needed more practice.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "didn't have any confidence witnessing for anyone". Hãy giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

範例: I prefer to sing only for myself because I don't feel confident enough to perform in front of others.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "make" nên là "makes", "relaxes" thay vì "relaxes". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý tốt hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and reduce stress. For example, singing your favorite song can boost your confidence and make you feel joyful.

× I love singing instead of I'm not really good at it because I feel really relaxed and I feel like I'm I'm getting more confident when singing.

✓ I love singing even though I'm not really good at it because I feel really relaxed and I feel like I'm getting more confident when I sing.

The phrase 'instead of' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'even though' to express contrast. Also, 'when singing' should be 'when I sing' to correctly use the verb form with a subject.

× I used to learn how to sing because I think that I have a talent in singing and also I really love singing too.

✓ I used to learn how to sing because I thought that I had a talent for singing and also I really loved singing.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Think' and 'have' should be in past tense 'thought' and 'had' to match 'used to learn'. Also, 'love' should be 'loved' to maintain past tense consistency.

× But maybe I'm not talent as I think, so I don't learn to sing now.

✓ But maybe I'm not as talented as I thought, so I don't learn to sing now.

The adjective 'talent' is incorrectly used; it should be 'talented'. Also, 'as I think' should be 'as I thought' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Don't learn' is awkward; better to say 'I don't sing now' or 'I am not learning to sing now'.

× I don't want to sing for anyone, I just want to sing for myself because umm, I need to realize that I'm not really good at singing and I really umm, I didn't have any confidence witnessing for anyone.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone; I just want to sing for myself because I realize that I'm not really good at singing and I really don't have any confidence singing for anyone.

The phrase 'I need to realize' is better as 'I realize' to express current understanding. 'I didn't have any confidence witnessing for anyone' is incorrect; 'witnessing' is wrong here, it should be 'singing'. Also, 'didn't have' should be 'don't have' to match present context.

× I think so because singing make you feel more relaxes and reduce anxiety after a long day.

✓ I think so because singing makes you feel more relaxed and reduces anxiety after a long day.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. 'Relaxes' is an adjective here and should be 'relaxed'. 'Reduce' should be 'reduces' to agree with singular subject.

× And for example if you sing your favorite song, you will feel more confident and you will enjoy this moment when you sing this and if it makes you happiness.

✓ For example, if you sing your favorite song, you will feel more confident and enjoy the moment when you sing it, and it will make you happy.

The phrase 'this moment when you sing this' is awkward; 'sing it' is better. 'If it makes you happiness' is incorrect; it should be 'it will make you happy'. 'Happiness' is a noun, but here an adjective 'happy' is needed.