唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear reason why you like singing and avoid unnecessary phrases like "why not sing?" Also, connect your ideas logically and avoid incomplete sentences.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and calm. Additionally, I want to become a magician, so singing is a way to express my creativity.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and articles, and try to make your sentences more concise and natural.

範例: No, I haven't learned singing formally, but a friend who is a guitarist taught me how to play guitar while singing. It feels amazing to do both together.

建議: Your answer is good but contains some small errors like "me family" instead of "my family" and "loved one" instead of "loved ones". Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: I want to sing for my family because they don't know that I can sing well. It will be a surprise for them, and I hope they will enjoy it and feel proud of me. Moreover, singing for my loved ones makes me feel happy and closer to them.

建議: Your answer has grammar mistakes and awkward expressions. Use correct verb forms and clearer phrases. Also, try to explain your opinion with specific reasons or examples.

範例: I totally agree because singing is a way to make people happy. When people hear songs, they often feel emotional and joyful, which improves their mood.

× I really enjoy singing because why not sing?

✓ I really enjoy singing because why not?

The phrase 'because why not sing?' is awkward and redundant. The correct expression is 'because why not?' which is a common idiomatic way to express a reason or justification. Removing 'sing' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× I feel relaxed and calm and.

✓ I feel relaxed and calm.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'and' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. Removing the extra 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× I wanna be a magician, so that's why I want to sing.

✓ I want to be a magician, so that's why I want to sing.

'Wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal or semi-formal contexts. Also, the sentence is grammatically correct but using 'want to' is more appropriate.

× No, I haven't learned singing but one of my friend is a guitarist and he taught me how to play guitar alongside with singing and it feels so amazing when I'm playing guitar with singing.

✓ No, I haven't learned singing but one of my friends is a guitarist and he taught me how to play guitar alongside singing and it feels so amazing when I'm playing guitar while singing.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to agree with 'one of my friends'. 'Alongside with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'alongside'. Also, 'with singing' is better expressed as 'while singing' to indicate simultaneous actions.

× I want to sing for me family because they do not know that I can sing well.

✓ I want to sing for my family because they do not know that I can sing well.

'Me' is an object pronoun and incorrect here; the possessive pronoun 'my' should be used to indicate ownership of 'family'.

× Singing for my loved one also makes me feel happy and closer to them.

✓ Singing for my loved ones also makes me feel happy and closer to them.

'Loved one' is singular, but 'them' is plural pronoun. To maintain agreement, 'loved ones' (plural) should be used.

× I'm agreeing with you totally because singing is the tool that makes people happy.

✓ I totally agree with you because singing is the tool that makes people happy.

'I'm agreeing' is incorrect because 'agree' is a stative verb and is not used in the continuous form. The simple present 'I agree' is correct.

× When people hear sing music, they got emotional, happy and various emotion.

✓ When people hear singing music, they get emotional, happy, and experience various emotions.

'Hear sing music' is incorrect; 'hear singing music' or 'hear music' is correct. 'Got' should be 'get' to match present tense. 'Various emotion' should be plural 'various emotions'. Also, adding 'experience' clarifies the meaning.